All Comments on 'Pakistani Wife Story'

Penis should not be capitalized. Unless Peter Penis was his name. If it was his name you should write another story about him. Peter Penis prancing through Patagonian pastures porking Pat from Poughkeepsie, or not.

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Nope

Sad certainly but sexy? Wonder what compels you to perpetrate puerile porn. And in a place called LITEROTICA.

SADAF IS A KEEPER!

i don't think DAUD realizes how EXTREMELY LUCKY he is.

I love Desi erotic stories.

If this passes for Romance in these folks life, I do feel sorry for them.

You successfully conveyed your fantasy to your readers on less than one page.

It was a 7-mile step for Daud to agree to share his wife in a threesome with any man.

From the story it is obvious he had a potentially strong yet still dormant voyeur side.

Daud & Sadaf's marriage has changed forever.

If Daud ever leaves Sadaf, i will marry her (& we will have a lot of fun!)

illiterate cuck shit.

I FULLY AGREE with above comment.

THE STORY HAS EROTIC QUALITIES.

I agree that the author managed to tell us a lot on less than one page!

We the readers inferred beyond any doubt that Daud wanted to share his wife in an MFM threesome.

Sadaf & Daud's marriage was exposed to a stress test whether the 2 of them realize it or not. They will stay together. The marriage has changed irreversibly, probably for the better.

Keep on writing please.

Dayum girl u classes as a hoe if u know

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Wow! Me being a British Pakistani guy loved your story.. i would love to have you for myself or as a threesome. I always wanted to fuck with a Pakistani married woman. Loved it xx

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Enjoyed your story. I worked with a Pakistan girl, who was a really hot milf. Once, she took my leg between hers and clasped hard. She tried a few more time.. then one day I just rented a room and fucked the bejesus outta of her. She turned out to be an amazing cock sucker.

Sorry, but you can't write. This is just semi-literate word soup. The English is all over the place.

Also whether or not someone is Pakistani is utterly irrelevant to the story.

It is an interesting story and if, as you claim, it is real, even better. Keep writing

Good sexy story, described well. Glad you quickly lost your sense of shame. Looking forward tor reading more.