All Comments on 'Paladin Princess Ch. 02'

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Anonymousover 1 year ago

A clever story line but too much emphasis/focus is on the sexual beauty and not enough on the strong hidden person. The dialogue is repetitive and somewhat immature. Editing is desperately needed.

PS: The word is mesmerizing

Horseman68 12 months ago

Have to agree with Anon below. Including the “more.”

Anonymous6 months ago

Forget them. This is the best writing I've come across on this entire site. You're doing great.

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