All Comments on 'Paloma'

What a gifted writer you are! A simple story but told with a lot of interesting devices. Paloma is such a colorful character. This story proves once again that well-paced humor is uber sexy. Thank you thank you thank you!

maybe because im 59... i should go buy me a store...

If I was him, I would have shoved a cock in her mouth to shut her up LOL

That was one of the funniest, yet annoying stories I have read in soooooooo long!!!!!

Annoying in a GOOD way LOL

100% for originality and wit ;-)

I really liked your story here and I saw that others loved it, too. I hope you make a part two of this which involves more than just hand-jobs and takes it further. Reminded me of many girls I knew and it was turn-on how flaky she was about it, not really caring and yammering. I will check your name regularly and hope you make part 2 soon.

and the mouth of this chick........damn......she had a lot on her mind. she certainly had a way of being annoying. i wonder though if she came from an introverted family........*LOL*. a girl like that would drive me nuts. you certainly captured her at her best. nice work all the way thru and thru. but i am catching on to a couple of your trademarks.....snort and spunk........*LMAO*......don

How funny is this?

The sad fact is I know someone like this in real life. Too bad she isn't as cute or as sexy as this girl. She's known as 'The Wife'. She never shuts up....

needs something in her mouth to shut her up, but that could be dangerous...

Sweet stuff :) Liked it and you caught that girl perfectly. Yoron

I'm still laughing....great job writing the story!

Thanks for a very entertaining read!

Wonderfully written and a lot of fun. Thanks for sharing.