All Comments on 'Pam & Zach: Toys in the Basement'

Straight, bi or gay, any man can be taught the joys of anal play

It's the 1st. of your stories I've read and built up to a great climax very well. Thanks I give it 5 stars and I think I'm going to read some of your other stories as well.

Constructive criticism. Your stories will get average ratings until you flesh things out a bit more and lengthen stories. Longer more detailed sex and dialogue will get results. You can see the basis for some great stories already.

Excellent story of 2 very experimental people. Made me hard reading it.