All Comments on 'Pamela, Pippa, and Me Ch. 01'

together like that for 8 weeks?

i would like to switch places with him...

Eight weeks home alone together, that should lead to at least eight more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

watch your spelling a few small goofs proof read better next time. also in one paragraph they went from 19 to 18 keep the ages the same. little screwups can ruin a good story so can not finishing one so be sure to finish this and do it properly please. please keep it to just the three of them do not add the parents they can find out but not join in.

A very good story. I look forward to the next chapter.

Maybe you can write 8 chapters and all from a different perspective - (one from peter, one from pam ...) That would be 24 chapters in all - YOU better get writting! Oh by the way NICE job!

If you are going to comment on another person's spelling, punctuation and grammar then make sure you get your own right!!

Glass houses and stones!!

@Storm62 - very good story and definitely needs further chapters!!

Excellent writing but I would have prefered more of an emotional build up and connection between them first... mind ya I prefer that type haha. Very good job though