All Comments on 'Pam's Parents: Holiday Orgy'

I stopped reading when the guys started sucking each other. Also, it got too confusing keeping all the characters straight. As I hadn't read the previous story, I didn't know who was who or their backstories.

I skipped reading when they started using gadgets.

Then it became exciting when the incest continued between brother and sister. Also mother and son. Then with Maureen with her parents.

Then I got turned off again with the gay sex, and I skipped it again.

Hope you make a separate story for gays alone.

You can continue still with Phil and Maureen have another baby boy. At the same time Pam got married and have a son.

Fast forward eighteen years, it will be another exciting incestuous orgy.

5 stars. fantastic sexy story. encore!!

All of it. Sexlf57 should have read 1 and 2 first, although when you create a new chapter that is great not in numerical sequence you should have specifically mentioned the 2 previous chapters -it makes it easier for the reader. Your note at the opening was probably a little vague. But great series. 5 stars. Please keep them coming!MM

I like that the characters are very open about their sexuality and are not afraid to cross barriers like being bisexual and incestuous.

Certainly not good for much more. I’d recommend going out and getting a little experience before you try and write about it. Turned off almost immediately when you had a “Swingers Sex Party”. If it’s a swingers party it is by definition a sex party.

A fictional story that pretends to be real, and fails miserably.

The gay stuff kinda ruined the story to be honest.