All Comments on 'Pandora and The Baron Ch. 04'

so far..... Need a little more character background....why a lord wants to 2 silver leopards....etc. Other than that, keep the chapters coming!! :)

There will be more info coming as I go along I promise you that. It is just taking me some time being as I hand write everything thing first then type it up for submission.

how'd I miss this one? Nice details, great characters. The only thing I might change is pacing, it does tend move light speed fast. I very much hope you will add to it soon.