All Comments on 'Pandora and The Baron'

Good start for your 1st story.

I look forward to more chapters.

I hope you will continue to develop the characters and plot as that is always more important than the sex.

Good start to the story. I was only a bit unsure why the leopard girl should find herself in a castle which she didn't know 'where in nine hells' it was. Who sent her there and why and to meet who? Was she sent there by her pride or was she trespassing? He clearly seemed to expect her if not know alot about her, so I hope you will clarify things in the next chapter. You do a great job with descriptive language. I love a story that draws a picture for me and yours certainly does. I enjoy the descriptions of sounds and other senses as much as sight which some authors forget.

Keep writing and I'm as anxious to learn more about the two characters as they are of each other.

Yes more about the character will come to light as I get more of it put up and as I go along with it. The sex will be in there I promise just taking me some time to lead up to it. I am glad that you like the story and I welcome any comments about it