All Comments on 'Pan's Gift'

I know that this is a sci/fi & fantasy entry on Literotica, but a woman who is 5'10" and 108 lbs. is skinny and flat-chested - she may be attractive and even sexy, but curves she has not. Even a slim woman that tall would weigh 150 lbs.

Give him a break. So he got the proportions wrong. It's a story! Hopefully he will not make such errors in the future. But it was still an interesting and sexy story.

Very imaginative work. Like it a lot. A couple of mistakes here and there like your 'loosing' which suppose to be losing hehehe but great work. Something different and refreshing. Worth spending my time reading it. Hope to see more of your work soon. Thank you again.

This is a beautiful peice of writing. You build up the suspense slowly and surely, as Pan does to Lilith. I thourighly enjoyed reading this!

Now, a sequel?

epic story, great detail and description and made me uber horny!

I would love to read more, though it truly was a great story!

I liked the story, but 108 lbs at 5'10" is pushing it too far even for a sci-fi modern day setting. On one hand as Annon posted, she would have to have no fat - period. This would be no curves in the bust or butt and would instead be protruding ribs. On the other hand, this would also mean no muscle as muscle equals weight (more weight than fat in some cases). With a character as active in sports as this one, either the height would have to come down (5'3" at base max) or the weight would have to come up (on average BASE minimum would be 135lbs... and that's before adding the curves) for this to be anywhere near humanly possible.

Please continue this story!!!

Join wattpad , this is great.

Well done! Perfect pace and build-up, loved the "no, surely he didn't" pregnancy-scare and the devilishly good ending.

Wow this is a very good story, my fav now. I want more :D Thanks!!

great story wish there was more

I would love for this story to be continued. One of the best I have read

If you haven't already, you should try to work this story into a larger narrative, its so very cool how you've created such foreboding dark imagery that serves an exciting sexually stimulating read, so very well. Please, keep writing, your

work inspires my own creativity. Love your work here, ❤❤

This was so amazing and written so well I was swept away by the visual imagery and sexual descriptives. It’s also so rare for me to be turned on sexually by a story that also involves romance, I am more into objectification but this was super romantic and I loved how it ended without the girl being abandoned or hopelessly hurt beyond repair. I don’t think I have enjoyed a reading experience this much in years. Thank you for such an enjoyable escape!

I think I may be in love with Pan! Damn! In comparison to this hot hunk, I find most of the males in my world to be childish and somewhat selfish. Pan, however, is a true man. Albeit a demon but, a man. Thanks for the very well written story!

Of the Myth and I noticed you got the girls name as Lilith as well. Well Done

Without any doubt this is the best story I have ever read on Literotica.

Enthralling, sensuous and seductive - never stop writing

Really enjoyed this one. Definitely worth reading. Thank you author.

so so so so very good, demands more, another chapter? Love your writing style forit captivates me and draws me in like all good reads should.Thank you so much