All Comments on 'Paradice Lost Pt. 03: A New Warden'

by AlexMakin

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magpie45magpie45about 8 years ago

I love this story but can you make it longer than two pages

AlexMakinAlexMakinabout 8 years agoAuthor
Don't worry!

Parts 4 and 5 are already submitted and more will be coming shortly. Glad you're enjoying it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Still unbelievable but loving it.

Gabrielle wants to be in control, but unfortunately is not creating any trust, possibly a gentle gentle approach may create what she requires. I think that the friends have never explored this side of each other during the dice game, and are therefore unprepared for their physical feelings. Can't wait for the next instalment and the development!!!!

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