All Comments on 'Paradise Island Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

More please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It came to a conclusion but I would love to read more about Matthew and what impact the women that go out into to the world have.

orzeuorzeualmost 3 years ago

Great story, but it ended too soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Incredible story!

Gammo21Gammo21over 2 years ago

good story. Does not offend like one I read recently which told her husband to grow a bigger dick.

londonteadrinkerlondonteadrinkerover 2 years ago

Thoroughly enjoyed it.

jschmosucksjschmosucksover 2 years ago

I truly enjoyed the story. I feel like there’s a lot more to tell that could make compelling story as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fantastic

No6_ThePrisonerNo6_ThePrisonerover 1 year ago

A nice Wonder Women crossover story. Appreciated that Matthew remained true to himself and was considerate towards the other women. Overall, a very enjoyable story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

No 5's in my world, but a good solid 4. You did a smokin' hot job on this one!

nyteramblernyterambler12 months ago

I enjoyed the story and the primess. He was lucky and yet unlucky but at least he had a core group of lady's. Would have been nice to have more but understand every story has an end.

goodshoes2goodshoes211 months ago

I really enjoy your mind.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

loved it!

Nighthawk1953Nighthawk19536 months ago

Wow! This story kept me wanting more. Will be looking forward to reading more of your creative mind.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great story. Could use a chapter 3 post epilog from chapter .

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