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northirishdivernorthirishdiverabout 2 months ago

oh looking like someone is going down the rabbit hole look forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Oh shit is right, how could he be so dumb.......

souperkev007souperkev007about 1 month ago

Liked the first chapter can’t wait for the second!

tarthearttartheartabout 1 month ago

oh I like the "free will" that Demi has in it!

thekeenreaderthekeenreaderabout 1 month ago

Ooooh what a cliffhanger!!!!

tauriredtaurired24 days ago
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> Dimitry was, like most Russian men, never happy. He was lonely, drank too much, and never voiced any complaints. No one in Russia ever complained.

Are you sure he was _Russian_? Name looks like Bulgarian one.

Russian one would Dmitry(as in Dmitry Medvedev)(older version is Dmitri (as in Dmitri Mendeleev))

check https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dmitry

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