All Comments on 'Paradise Isle - The Beginning'

absolutely amazing work, please continue with other stories in this setting

Great story, so much potential!! I hope you explore a lot of the bimbofication theme for the main couple, make her a nasty enhanced (massive surgery, piercings, tattoo's) submissive bimbo for her Daddy, wearing the most outrages outfits, just some ideas :)

Loved this story! I would love to holiday here!

Maybe audrie and danni holiday here in one chapter? My heart bleeds for more chapters in that story. Xx

I do have a chapter in the works...

Wonderful story with a lovely storyline, very well written. Matt & Stacy are cute and adorable.

The story ended just when it gets really very interesting as to what will happen next. Do try and extend the story, there is so much potential left untapped.

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and the character development is exceptional. 💋

Veronica

Liked the story, loved the characters and the possibilities it opens up to. Great story telling also. Overall excellent work.

I like the story. Though I found it a bit too slow at some places. But as a introduction to the series it was neccessary. Perhaps it might be a good idea to repeat the meaning of the wrist band colors from time to time or have a list handy.

You spin a great storyline. The sex is mentioned or referred to, not the ultra graphic way many writers use.

Job well done

“This whole place is dedicated to making everyone horny. And it works!"

Stacy topless towards the restaurant, and Stacy nipples chained before breakfast, was a heavenly description!

I understand the appeal of a world where everyone is 'beautiful', but I like it when weaknesses, insecurities, physical imperfections, hesitations and doubts are also shown. Maybe in the future?

The description of the Resort complex is magnificent.

Rea;;y enjoyed it.