All Comments on 'Paradise Isle - The Mermaid Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I really love this series and I'd love it even more if you carried it on. I also love to be a mermaid though without the tail when floating nude in the ocean. Thanks for sharing these!

chastitygirl90chastitygirl90almost 2 years ago

Dear ChangeYourPassword

I really love the story too. That you work on a mermaid story was a big surprise for me, and I enjoyed it really.

Only sad that the actual story part is over. I mean what all the possibilities to increase the mermaid feeling the resort might have.

Julie would be a perfect volunteer ;).

Sandra

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

its neat i would like her to have to do some aquarium time put on some kind of tiara sensor that needs to be under water 1 minute every 10 minutes or so

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Thanks for an other finished story and as always I love all of them. Curious for Your next sbmission, guess it catches my taste as well... JtL

ChangeYourPasswordChangeYourPasswordalmost 2 years agoAuthor
Thanks for your comments

I'm pleased that you enjoyed this tail, tale. (LOL, I've been dying to use that!) I do have an outline for an Epilog, perhaps I'll get to it, someday. In the mean time, I'm already well on my way to publishing another new Paradise Isle story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent story! Could the island management strongly suggest that perhaps her breasts could be adorned with more metal to make her even more exotic (nipple shields behind her rings?) and perhaps even a nose ring of some kind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Do hope there is going to be more Julie Mermaid Adventures

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story is realy good. I liked Julie's adventure a lot. Indeed it would be great to hear more about her and how she copes being a mermaid for a year. Moree about her times in the Fet-Resort would be nice too. As it's a fetish for her at least. ;)

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