All Comments on 'Paradise Isle - The Pony Pt. 01'

The start of a very good story and I enjoyed it look forward to the coming chapters

I like the the concept and looking forward to the next exciting chapters

Good story.

Look forward for newer chapters (and newer stories in this setting)

AFAIK, ponies are herd animals. It would be cruel to keep her separated from the others. Hope we meet them in the next chapter.

Great start, thanks for sharing.

Great story! I hope Scott becomes a very strict, but caring Master. Taking total permanent control of his pony in body and mind. Where he takes charge of her breeding and appearance, branding her as her owner, maybe a real brand or some eleborate tattoo's and more piercings. Keep up the good work!

interesting. I just wish you'd do one where a man becomes something...

Love it!

May I suggest a hollow butt plug that doesn’t need removal. Just releases wherever. X

There are several more chapters coming. Part 2 should be available in a few days. As always I appreciate all of your input, positive and negative, as well as your suggestions (although usually, I'm already onto part two or three before part one shows up on the site - too late to incorporate them...)

Great start. Let's see if she wants to stay at the end. She could work for the government of the island. They surely want to build more holiday resort related stuff. She could plan part time and be a pony most of the time. To become a pony-architect. :D

I like the idea with the hollow butt plug in the comments. But that will be a messy affair. Perhaps one where she still has control of her bowels?

What fun! I’m trying to image myself in Scott’s position and failing miserably. I hate that he can’t have one conversation with her at the beginning and she has no way to communicate her needs. It would drive me crazy. Looking forward to the rest of the story !!!

Thank you for the creative take on fantasy island. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Love it ...is there any hope for male pony stories ?

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I'm looking this, looking forward to the next chapters.