All Comments on 'Paramour to a Star'

I like the story very much. Lori is very believable, in her hesitation, and in her reactions afterwards. Maybe I'd have reworded the letter a bit, but all in all she's great. I like the slow start of the story and the end also.

Like I said, a great work!

Bravo! You have done the impossible. You have given us someone who not only isn't eclipsed by "Mr. Dupree" but stands very much as an equal if not at more times even better. Actually, I was also happily surprised by the ending. Great writing - Thanks

What a girl. Nice to see a well developed foil to 'Mr. Dupree'. You earned your '5'. Thanks.

This is a fun story made more enjoyable because as the female reader you can easily put yourself in the protagonist's role. Cute ending too!