by tastycandy
This could have been good or even great. However the repeated spelling and grammatical errors kept distracting from the story. I suggest the next time get an editor to review the story before posting it.
Spoilt by the implausible people, possibly the most beautiful parents ever, 10 and 11 inch cocks, come on, write a story with ordinary people that could be acceptable. The story and truth and dare questions were good. I will try another of your stories, see if the promise becomes reality, I am sure your stories deserve higher marks than this as got.