by Darkriter
thanks for this out here ... look forward to seeing more in the series
Good, believable, think i'm going on a road trip :). Parker is a bit of a weird name for an American, is more like a surname in UK (or a butler!).. Only 1 spelling mistake (my pet hate), you write "The site and sensation" and I think that should be 'sight' instead of 'site'.
Keep up the good work, will look out for chapter 2.