All Comments on 'Parker Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
good story

thanks for this out here ... look forward to seeing more in the series

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Good, believable, think i'm going on a road trip :). Parker is a bit of a weird name for an American, is more like a surname in UK (or a butler!).. Only 1 spelling mistake (my pet hate), you write "The site and sensation" and I think that should be 'sight' instead of 'site'.

Keep up the good work, will look out for chapter 2.

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Really, i just want to know that someone cares and is interested in what I'm in to

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