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jy55jy55about 7 years agoAuthor
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Please comment I would love to know what you were thinking of my story is a very real true story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I LOVE THIS!!

Very well written, and I loved how Debbie knew just what to say. Dirty talk with the mention of the 'C' word is such a massive turn on for me. I came reading this, and I wasn't even halfway into the story then!

Please keep writing. And maybe the next time you do a story please fill it with lots of dirty talk. Oh, and one more thing, may I suggest some names for the characters for the next story? I would like to see the characters named Priya and Alex

xx

jy55jy55about 7 years agoAuthor
Response to anonymous

Thank you so much for your feedback damn I like your response a lot and it turns me on to know that you got off reading the story!!

I hope when the mood strikes you, you read it again and it gets you off again! thanks for the real positive feedback. It motivates me to tell more stories.

By the way with very few embellishments that was a true story from my life. Not trying to make myself out to be some sex god or anything but I've had my share of experiences and that was just one of the better ones that I remembered. The other one called One Nights Joy was actually with her as well, we were together a number of years.

jy55jy55about 7 years agoAuthor
More coming soon

Another story soon

NastyBabygirl69NastyBabygirl69almost 7 years ago
Awesome!! :)

Hi. I just read your response to the comment I had left on your story, thank you for taking the time out to reply. :) And yes, I did come back to re-read this! 🙈 Effin' love this one! And I'm going to be reading your new one next! :) Will leave you some feedback on that too when I've read it. :) x

jy55jy55almost 7 years agoAuthor
Response to nasty baby girl

Thank you for your response now. that was very gratifying to know that I touch you in some sort of way with my experiences.

I'm going to take your request under advisement. Using whatever names you like I certainly wouldn't mind throwing that in and yeah I'm been a little delayed but I am definitely starting to channel some thought into coming up with the next one.

there's plenty of stuff to draw from, so I'd be curious if you want to send a private message other than here, it's up to you whether you've read any of the others.

you don't have to comment on all of them I'm not requesting that you do that, but it's great when you get some feedback from someone back and forth. then you know you're communicating .

thanks again and I hope you have lots of fun here!!

you gave my ego quite a boost.

jy55jy55almost 7 years agoAuthor
Just an update

Sometimes life gets a little bit in the way of things but I have a germ of the idea for the next story percolating. Thanks to those of you favorited this story and who have commented

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