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All Comments on 'Parties'

by starsinger

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Confusing,Rambling

I can't figure out who these people are or where they live. There are some grammar problems. The end didn't make any sense.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Doesn't meet the standards of your other stories

This appeared to have been rushed. It doesn't flow as well as some of your other stories, it's disjointed. Was it rushed for some reason? Or was it pieced together over a period of time from other stories.

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