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All Comments on 'Parting the Red Sea'

by Elaine_Mature

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colin23colin23about 2 months ago

Outstanding. Very convincing.

lexlogan8lexlogan8about 2 months ago

Beautiful. It is difficult to write well in dialect or broken English but you managed it and here it gave the story the proper feel of a stranger in a strange land.

UpperNorthLeftUpperNorthLeftabout 2 months ago

A lovely story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Wonderful, 10 stars! Don Sable found himself a real wife. She will care for his home, and love him, and they will make lots of babies. She will then learn the word, MOMMY, and Don, her husband will be DADDY!

AnonymousAnonymous3 days ago

Thank you, again.

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Older author and reader, interested in emotionally significant writing with empathy and respect. New story on its last draft, about coming-of-age and a road trip. Not sure what to call it, but it features three young women catching a ride with a farm boy, headed for the big c...