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All Comments on 'Parting the Red Sea'

by Elaine_Mature

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AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Thank you, again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Wonderful, 10 stars! Don Sable found himself a real wife. She will care for his home, and love him, and they will make lots of babies. She will then learn the word, MOMMY, and Don, her husband will be DADDY!

UpperNorthLeftUpperNorthLeft2 months ago

A lovely story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

lexlogan8lexlogan82 months ago

Beautiful. It is difficult to write well in dialect or broken English but you managed it and here it gave the story the proper feel of a stranger in a strange land.

colin23colin232 months ago

Outstanding. Very convincing.

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Older author and reader, interested in emotionally significant writing with empathy and respect. Had an inspiration, wrote The Note Game in a three-day sprint. Now, back to that road trip story! New story on its last two scenes, about coming-of-age and a road trip. Not sure ...