All Comments on 'Party Affiliations'

Good, but could have been better. Tawny should have fucked the regional supervisor and made him think he was giving her a baby...all on tape. Then Jack could have hit him much harder with the thought of making him think he had knocked up Tawny in his, Jack's house. Then Jack could have really laid it on that boss, to the point that the mark may have committed suicide, and of course recommending Jack for a Regional Manager promotion, thinking he was helping to allow for his illegitimate brat by Tawney.

Needs more chapters.