by rpickman
Outstanding story and well done.
I would have loved another paragraph or three, but beggars and choosers!
You definitely deserve to win this years Halloween story contest.
Five stars all the way!
but, why waste so much space on the blow job scene? He should have knotted and bred that bitch from the get-go!
Write a chapter 2 PLEASE
But it ended too soon. Like the other guy said, he should have knotted and bred her before the end.