by Ashson
He seemed like a total asshole and winds up being a loving husband who's wife was playing along? That was fun. I didn't see it coming.
I can imagine the conversation on the drive home . . .
Fabulous story. Love your finesse & ease with this genre. You truly are the Master Storyteller, sexy stories, well-drawn characters & underlying it all sardonic humour. Perfection. Please keep them coming. Your work keeps bringing me back to literotica. Your words feed my fantasies.
Well written and a surprise twist. Don't know if your longer works are as good but this one was enjoyable. Thanks!
After several submissions in a row in which assertiveness bordered on non-consent, this one seemed to push that boundary even more forcefully! The final twist caught me with mouth agape! I now think the recent trend was designed to set us up for this image-reversal tale! Nicely done!
5*
Brave, not to lock the door, but it's a fantasy I enjoy, especially if it was illicit, but well done, whatever the ending.
Chilley
I hate cheaters but I love when a loving married couple explore their fantasies anytime and everywhere. Carry on.
This had all the elements of an Ashson vignette...slight reluctance, sensual enjoyment of both parties, 'hidden' exposure and raw passion...even ONE sharp, short smack on a bare bottom....and the denouement was unexpected..... thanks!!