All Comments on 'Passing Some Time'

You have the most amazing young women down under. Too bad Indiana can't compete! 5* ~~ JB Edwards

Fun story. A little light on the reluctance than your normal fare, but fun nonetheless.

I loved this story and the way you unfolded it. It flowed naturally but with the right amount of uncertainty of 'where' or 'if' it would go. The ending leaves the door open to at least a couple of possible follow-on chapters. Firstly, the possibility of the young lady coming back and bringing her sister with her to prove she had told the truth about her experience. And secondly, the possibility of a road trip, with or without her sister. Good work, 5 stars!