by darkphoenix1
Now this was completely unexpected but I still thoroughly enjoyed it. Great job. I love it, your work is so full of passion and energy. I wish I could write half this good. This is definately one of my favorites.
I read that story at work and had to go into the men's room to masturbate immediately afterward. Lovely.
was fantasitc, hot and erotically written. I had some problems with the * *. They distract the reader from your very sensually written words. Otherwise, keep up the same type of work and I'll be waiting to see you published, brother sister stories are so much hotter than Daddy stories.
What the fuck is wrong with you... this is not erotic.. this is like a rape sequence.. only with a lil more consent... the guy is a possessive bastard and the girl an ass.
what an ass nothing but a shitty rape story it should be in the nonconsensual section not incest what a loser you needsome jail time to find out what rape is like do us a favor and give up writting you suck at it icouldn't even get half way through it was so bad
I thought the pocessiveness was very well done; as was the anger. You need to add another chapter to the story and finish it. I don't think that Max is the only one who is pocessive.
Very sexy story. I'm really hoping there's a sequel. The conflict created by the brother's possesive asshole-ness should make for some real interesting drama. When those two get around to actually fucking it's going to be even more explosive. Can't wait to see how their relationship develops.
omg! i can't believe how good you are. i've read your other two incest stories and you are an amazing author.i hope you write more soon. your def. an author that i will be visiting for new material. thanks for the read!
Max is showing typical male aggressiveness in going all out for his sister's body, and Jenna's body responds to it. Her sisterly cunt gets drenched as Max approaches it with his big hard cock. Like plenty of brothers, he knows his big cock'll feel great up between his sister's legs and his agitated balls drive him on. He's just got to unload his brotherly balls up his beloved sister's warm wet twat, and that's what Jenna finally wants as well. Jenna's confused and distressed--mostly at her own reaction, she's had the greatest cum of her life--but there's no doubt Max'll have his way. From now on, Jenna's cunt belongs to him. His fat prick's the only one that'll pound her honeyhole, his creamy sperm the only sperm to fill her twat to overflowing. Real soon Max'll fuck a baby up his sister's twat. Then he'll be one happy sisterfucker bursting with pride.
This was so hot. The way he commanded her at the end just means this needs to be continued. Please!