All Comments on 'Past the Point of No Return'

Very good story that SCREAMS for another chapter. Or two. Here's hoping.

NOTE: Past the Point of No Return was actually the first draft of A Wonderful But Dirty Little Secret. Lit sent Past the Point back because it contained a couple sentences that went slightly overboard vis-a-vis Lit rules. I then made corrections, revised it and then resent it with a new title - A Wonderful But Dirty Little Secret.

Correction: The revised story is titled, A Dirty But Wonderful Little Secret.

Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

Perfect wording describing an amazing story of pure love " Point of no return, unapologetic, uninhibited, totally absorbed and juxtapose and great examples hat mothers can feel.

Good story! Hoping to read more about them…. And hopefully about him getting his sexy mom pregnant. It would be interesting to find a way for his sister to discover their secret, but instead of being disgusted, she would be jealous and want to join in their relationship and have her brother impregnate her too.

Hope they continue their love affair on a regular basis.

The talking was idiotic and skipping the actual sex was more of an r rated scene than erotic.

The sly game of seduction. Hot.

Foreplay or deposition at Horny Cunt/Stupid Dick LLP?

Please continue.

Meh. Had great potential, but the lack of detail in the actual sexual act made it just a plain vanilla story.

Started off well but not did not deliver.

Very well done! Maybe Merle finds out and becomes enticed herself.

Nicely done. Nothing abusive and nothing cliche. Enjoyable end-to-end.

Wasn’t sensual. ***

mother son, good story I'd give it 5, sister 32 younger brother 19,handsom young man, a very warm day, I was wearing a very short skirt and low cut blouse tiny crutchless panties I was sat on the sofa he was sat on the chair facing me our mam was out at bingo I saw my brother looking at me at my legs I knew he was trying to look between my legs at my crutchless panties the tip of his tongue slowly licking his lips my brother looking I knew he fancied our mam knew he wanted her wondered if he had her I was getting turned on my nipples hard my pussy wet he was still trying to look between my legs I looked at his face his eyes his tongue still licking his lips I slowly opened my legs wider and wider his eyes opened really wide he could see my hairy pussy I could see he had a hard on a big hard on his hand was squeezing his hard bulge it looked so big I opened my legs lots wider my hand fingers between my legs in my panties I was touching feeling my soaking wet pussy he unzipped his shorts got his vedry big hard cock out I knew mam hadn't had that huge cock I her cunt I laid on the sofa on my back my legs wide open looking at y brother saying come fuck me brother he did hiscock depin my cunt my arms legs wrapped ight round my brother he lifted my blousxe upover my big bare tit buried his face between my tits biting one hard nipple then my other nipple had fucking me hardd fastso deep making me come and come somuch on his cock he came somuch in mmy cunt I was on the pill I was panting I know you want man tofuck her gto loved her i'llhelp you get her you her lover as well as me