All Comments on 'Past the Point of Pain Ch. 03'

got to love a day/night in the mind of a true sub who adores her Master...Thank you for sharing a wonderful tale/expierence with us. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

One of the best stories i have read in a very long time.

Thank you for sharing that with us.

And the bond between Yyou both.

WICKED NUFF SAID...

Some wonderful, romantic-style plot developments are peppered through this story. I just hope the silly 'capping' stops in the next chapter. It's starting to annoy me. Fine for chat rooms. Not stories. The other thing that bothered me was a plot device. Saying 'some sort of connection occurred' just doesn't happen. Everything is planned, agreed to, consensual. So in a literary sense it cut a huge corner. In a real sense you've misrepresented what might have actually happened.

the trust that woman gives to her man is something else.and man does he deliver.thanks.

Love this -- the image of the pool cue between her lips is creatively set up and very appealing.