All Comments on 'Pat Wants To Play'

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chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Hot And Complete*****

Damn that was a very sexy one page story. Great storyline with a bit of hot storytelling. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

1. I glanced over and tapped her shoulder, "Your mine."

*YOU'RE

2. "Are you alright, can you breath."

No question mark and *breathe.

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