All Comments on 'Patience's Treatment'

by MoonCarrot

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Sweet!

You put in writing one of my fantasies! Loved it and would like to see more of her "sessions". :-) 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nice start

yummy...

amirabreeamirabreeover 10 years ago
Wonderful

Accurate for the time period and extremely arousing. Please write more.

LaChatteNoireLaChatteNoireover 10 years ago
Pretty good

I like the themes you're working with, and I'm interested to see where this is going.

FYI, a petticoat is an under-skirt that would be attached around the waist over a corset, so I was a bit confused when you mentioned it in the context of her breasts. I think the garment you're describing, worn under a corset, would probably be a shift or possibly a chemise.

MoonCarrotMoonCarrotalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for the comments, its great to get feedback. Encouraged by this site I have just reworked the Patience series into an Amazon eBook under the pen name Rian David

ProfDavrosProfDavrosalmost 9 years ago
Delightful

A wonderful story. So very different and more subtle than much of the fiction here.

I can see how this period might generate all sorts of erotic stories on simpler pleasures compared to today's more open and undervalued sexuality.

Looking forward to more.. Congrats on the e-book.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
LOVE IT!

Amazing story, love love love it. I study history of sexuality and it's so great to see a story that's this hot and doesn't break the historical realism. I really enjoyed it! :D

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