All Comments on 'Patrick Needs Help'

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Hey sorry -- the main characters here are Patrick and Chris -- I had originally called Patrick Jason in an earlier draft and did not edit it properly. I submitted the edit and expect the correct version to be up soon. Sorry about that! 6 3 19

We'd love to hear about Patrick's recovery and how Chris helps him as they learn a little about D/s together. Chris is the Dom and gets to bring a few toys and takes his time getting Patrick ready to be his sub. It would be a great story.

Good story.

As i was reading this hot story, I imagined Cris was "helping" me: he wiped my ass, thoroughly washed it, then cleaned the inside by using his wet fingers, then he ate my ass, then he tongue fucked my ass... By the time he started to push his "eight incher" into my ass, I felt I totally belonged to him. After the story ended, i had a strange feeling all of above really happened to me. I was not delusional, the emotions that the story invoked in me were that strong.

Short, sweet, fucking hot story

As you go forward with this story, can Chris have some chest hair? Patrick seems the ideal guy for one chest hair given how hairy his kegs and ass are.

So hot! Hopefully Patrick needs more help!!

Not interested in reading about some guys smelly shit.