All Comments on 'Patrick's Story Pt. 01'

Didn't think I'd like it as much, but you have a gift. Even enjoyed the toddler. :-)

Great story!

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Boyd Percy:

Thank you so much, Boyd! I'm really flattered you read AND commented on all my story chapters so far. That's really motivating. Thanks for reading, and I hope you like the next two part chapter I am writing. :)

RedMockers:

Haha, you even like the toddler! LOL I take it you are a person that doesn't like little children too much? I used to be like that too, but I had to work on it after my brother and his wifey had kids and my cousin had 2 kids. I'm around them a lot. I'm still not completely comfortable around children. (sticky hands, constant need for cuddles and attention, CONSTANT chatter and "guess what's" and questions omg. lolol)

You're so encouraging, Red. Thank you for coming all this way in my little fantasy land. Part 10 will be in 2 parts. It's a long chapter. <3 (hugs)

Fantastic wrting, thank you so much for all your work.