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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good premise.

Pretty good sex, but needs more nitty gritty details. Some conversations about how the other would like it would be good. Directions. Harder. Softer. Faster. Slower. Right there. More. Please don't stop. Or, perhaps, slow down, I don't want it to be over too soon.

Wasn't fond of the ending.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This wae almost my story my story. I married her and it lasted 58 yeard.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
good introduction

This is a good introduction to the character Patty, and the story is well-written, but the love scenes almost seem rushed, and are far too short.

BufoAmericanusBufoAmericanusalmost 3 years ago

A Well written story with imagination!

wwaldripwwaldrip4 months ago

Lovely story, really enjoyed reading it. Everyone’s first should be so lovely.

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Been suffering a bit of writer's block lately. I think I've overcome that, at least for the moment as I just submitted my third work in a little over a week. "Molly" was a story I'd been working on for over two years and the newest one "Irresistible Force" nearly as long. Sti...