All Comments on 'Paul and Linda'

Dodged a major bullet with Mia.

It was OK. I mean, they both found each other and love so quickly it didn't feel like the "romance" to me. It was a love story but more like ordinary life than a hall mark romance type. Hime getting back together with his ex for god knows why would be a romance like fate brought them together again. This was a good love story.

Good story!

4

Very sweet and a great pair.

Philly Talk:

wid/widdout

wodder

Yo

Youz

Ac-uh-me

Kath-uh-leen

cock-uh-roach

downa shoor

The land where gangs of 4 wheelers aren't prosecuted because the police just can't be bothered and it's too expensive. I might know the area :)

Write on.

5 star story, a decent romance with a happy ending. Not sure why this is a labeled as "btb" though, Mia and certainly not Dawn were burned with the former not really deserving it and the latter most certainly needing it.

Definitely not a btb. Too long and too long-winded. The dialog was contrived. Almost as if someone had a thesaurus, but little idea how to use it.

How mushy can you get? Pretty darn mushy I guess! Nice story, I'm all worn out with all the sex! 5 stars

The Brother that keeps visiting, I kept expecting it to come out that he was the father of all her kids. That Linda's job on the farm included fucking all her brothers. Since she left the farm the Mom had to take care of all the men. Linda and Paul were so happy, I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop. When Paul finds out he has NO Sperm, and realizes that he can't be the father of his three kids. Linda finally confesses it is her brother, Howard? Divorce ensues. 10 stars to writer, Great Story, Great Writing, Great Effort! Thanks, Buster2U

Loved the stories. I considered it as actually 2 stories. One about dating Mia and going nowhere with her, fortunately, and starting a 2nd life and another life story with Linda. Very fortunate. Great writing. What's the story with Evelyn? Everyone's got a story.

A very nice story with all the right elements! Full Marks *** 5! Love it!!! 5 Stars!

Mia screwed u, Linda didn't! Wonderful story, 10 stars!