All Comments on 'Paul & Liz Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
sooo

my fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Having just gone through this...

Same scenario just happen with my wife and I about 6-7 months ago. This story is so accurate it made me chuckle a little. Good read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Scarey people out tonight.

Be careful out there. Gay writer trying to write a loving wife story. I mean what is a 'normal. man doing getting his wife to fuck his ass. That is just not right! This belongs in the fetish section not this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
fantasy

this si my fantasy as well. please carry it forward

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great start

Im looking forward to reading part 2.

Jenna2641Jenna2641almost 14 years ago

A wonderful start to what promises to be a stimulating series of stories. Thank you for sharing your creativity.

Kiera_NightgalKiera_Nightgalalmost 14 years ago
caught by

desire of hearing her tell me just what she thinks how her way it going to be and how hard a road she is going to drive me down

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Nasty shit

Why not just find a man to take care of your twink urges?

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