All Comments on 'Pauline's Pumpkins - Day 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot

Love mega milky huge monster titties. More!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I love the subject matter, as huge lactating breasts are my primary fetish, but the mystery parts of this story have me concerned it will veer off into territory I don’t like. The mystery milking machine, the dogs... somehow I think this is going to go bad and weird real quick

PackinMannPackinMannover 5 years agoAuthor
Hey you gotta point

In response to an anonymous comment on subject matter

1) spent like half an hour trying to think of a good response so sorry if I misconvey my message, I wish you all the best!

2) I don't want to defend myself because I want to put this work out as I imagine it to be, but I agree that there is some intense weirdness suggested in the story so far and while I want to get weird I mean to do so in moderation below the main story of a girl with massive milky breasts living life, and as part of an interesting narrative I want to tell. I will avoid focusing on the weirdness because I want to use it to make what I really enjoy in the story more interesting, doing more with her breasts, and I will do what I believe makes it a better story for myself and for others, even if there is a balance to be met.

Thanks for the comment, keeps me keeping my head straight about what I post on this site. I widh that what I write will stay enjoyable to you but I understand if I enter territory that does not sit well with you and hope in the future I will have better, more universally fun stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love those growing lactating tits

Please, please write more. This is a 10/10 story so far. I just hope that, like the other person said, you avoid anything too weird along the lines of what he's/she's worried about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
MORE

Please, more milk and growing breasts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

To the Author-

In response to your response, I apologize if I wasn’t clear myself. I don’t think the weirdness is inherently bad! Perhaps it’s just too much hentai while I’m waiting for my favorite Literotica authors to update, but my concern wasn’t the weird phenomenon. I was simply worried they were a harbinger of a horror or extreme non-consent theme. I hope the story continues in the vein of what you described and doesn’t end up with our heroine strapped to a machine with weird dogs behind her. What you’ve written thus far is very good and I hope to see more.

GuySmutGuySmutover 5 years ago
Awesome stuff my dude.

Love this stuff, hell you make my stories look like child's play. I'm gonna have to step it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome!

Love the foreshadowing and setup so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Brilliant

Always loved stories about huge, heavy mams giving out milk. This one did the trick.

daddymacdaddymacabout 4 years ago

you got to do more to this story!! got to be like 4 more chapters! PLEASE WRITE MORE

PackinMannPackinMannabout 4 years agoAuthor
If you're interested in more, check my bio!

I've started working on writing this kind of work again and for different reasons I've changed my approach going forward

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