All Comments on 'Paul's Baby'

A highly entertaining look into the life of two happily unfaithful wives.

I do not like cheating and I did not like what was happening in this story but you've spun such a wonderful tale that I became a believer and rooted for Paul. I think you're a brilliant writer that knows how to take even senior men, I am almost 70, on an enjoyable trip! It will be very clever of her to have another baby with Paul for her husband will NEVER know the difference. Look even I am getting with the cheating programme! Full Marks – 5-Stars!

Why are some readers no negative? They know they are reading a fantasy, something that will never happen in their real lives. I rate Scouries as the best entertainer on Literotica! His stories are not just stimulus for lonely, frustrated readers; they have depth, meaning and a ring of reality as many of us would like it to be. His stories always hint at more chapters to come but that is the beauty of them, they leave you hungry for more. If you don’t like his style - find your entertainment elsewhere. Personally, I’m over 70, live alone and read over a hundred books each year. When I discovered Scouries, I started with the first story (alphabetically) and will not stop until the end. Thank you Scouries, its disappointing that you no longer post stories on Literotica. Once I reach the end of your 73 stories, I will be checking other sites, hoping for more!

That's a well told story. I had to read it in one sitting. Looks like there's room for some follow up on the theme of Cathy actually moving in after working on johnny for a bit. I can see this having several more chapters.

Disgusting

Just another shit story about selfish vile women

Treacherous, deceitful and....considering the deliberate paternity fraud, criminal harridan. Definitely one who needs a good burning, along with her friend.

Well the author said we'd hate her and he was right. So I gave it a "hate it" star.

Lousy pitch trying to paint her as the "victim" to be pitied and even accepted. She just lives to be a slut and wants only to be well fucked while parasiting off her hard working loving husband and palming bastards off on him. She has no business being married and given her friend's behaviour she shouldn't consider the idea again either.

Some dolt below said it was hub's fault for leaving a 27 year old alone while he had to work to provide for her! Christ, how dumb or feminised do you have to be to lap that up? The guy is away for a few days making a sales presentation and it gets extended for a couple of days more. Men have been posted abroad for stints of up to 2 years and come home to faithful wives.

She hadn't been deserted and she knew full well the track record of her friends before going out with them and even let them "dress" her for hunting. Then in one of the busy club rooms, she, a 27 year old grown woman, married to boot, stands there and lets a "boy" simply reach over and drop her top to bare her breasts! The sound of the face slap should have echoed across the room! Instead she was simply a slut waiting to play. As for her "boy" he didn't care much for what might happen if the neighbours saw him and blabbed to her hub later did he?

You know I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It shows just how human people can really be. Johnnie should know not to leave a 28 yr old woman alone after only 5 years of marriage. Of course Lizzie would be lonely and vulnerable, a prime target for seduction. Instead of persecuting the lonely wife maybe you could berate the stupid husband for leaving their wives so vulnerable in the first place.

Besides this site is supposed to be a fictional site meaning it is not real. If you do not like the story then don't read it. Plus you should not even bother commenting about it.

Like I said, I loved this story. With that said I don't believe Johnnie is this stupid. I think he knows Paul, how else you explain how his flight lands literally as Paul's plane is taking off. That is one hell of a coincidence and I do not believe in coincidences.

Thanks for the read,

John

BALLSY!

Incredibly ballsy of scouries to ask the readers not to hate that faithless, cheating CUNT. That bitch needs a severe reality check. 1 question... what did her hubby do to deserve that shirt? I'm guessing nada.

What a sad story.

What did John do to deserve being treated like a piece of shit? Neither of them have even the slightest inkling of guilt for betraying the man who does his best to provide for his wife and her child.

Why not simply get a divorce since she clearly has no respect for John.

Should be another part where the husband finds out and comes home to kill all three...Kids are his and finds a new love. Is only fair

This started out good but got silly as it went on. This really needs a Part 2 with the husband perspective. Maybe not paint him as completely clueless. Just saying.

The passing off of a baby as the progeny of the husband is always a risky proposition - now that would make a good plot line.

Two sociopaths playing games with innocent lives as their chips. If you weren't such a decent writer, they would come off as silly and unbelievable, but in the theater of the mind, these two create a cognitive disturbance in the minds of those with even a modicum of conscience. You know, like Hannibal Lecter. 5/5 but not on the merits of the story.

She's 5 years younger than her husband. So he's not "too old for her."

Nice... 5 stars

What a fucked up woman...and a fucked up story ...written by a fucked up writer!!!! Hope all rot in hell

Great story love the idea of wife getting fucked many times by large hard young cock and the fact she knew she was getting pregnant would love for my wife to do this i get hard thinking she is

Posted in 2007, this story scored 4.16. Had it been posted now, it’d be lucky to score 3.00, because so many readers would hate it. It has that worst of LW themes, foisting the lover’s baby off on her husband as his own.

Take this story for what you will,but lets look at this objectively,we have Cathy who is a full-blown slut that cheats on her husband and ends up getting pregnant by her lover and she has her husband raise the daughter as his since the lover neither wants the wife or baby except for sex.

And Cathy doesn't have one ioda of remorse for cheating,so ask yourself,would it be fair if Cathy's Husband John to basically have the same attitude as Cathy and go out and fuck another Woman behind his Wifes back,ab-so-fucking-lutely and also get her pregnant,but ask if the roles were reversed would Cathy leave John if she found out he was cheating,my answer to that would be you bet your sweet ass.

Women generally are cruel,vindictive,arrogant creatures,to them it is the typical princess persona that they hold theirselves as royalty almost and see their actions as justified whether cheating or retribution.Now if Cathy indeed loves John and doesn't mind if he has sex with other Women and tells John the truth that the daughter is by another Man that she has sex with but doesn't want a commitment and John loves the daughter as his own then I think John and Cathy should totally stay together because in life people can distinguish between love and sex,so even if one or both Spouses have sex with other people doesn't mean the other loves you any less and always return home for love and support at the end of the day.People place too much emphasis on Marriage Vows,if you can separate those two points as different the happier you'll be.

Back to Cathy and John,specifically Cathy you ask is she truly evil for what she did,no she is not evil but considering Johns feelings I really think Cathy should lay all her cards out on the table and tell her Husband and let the chips fall where they may,just my two cents.

Everyone is happy. And what the husband does not know cannot hurt him!

But the fact was she was contemptuous of her husband. She felt no guilt, no shame or embarrassment, and you only experience that level of apathy for something you don’t care about. So if she doesn’t care about her husband, how long do you think it’ll be before she finds a better man? How king before she tires of him or fights with him, making both their lives miserable and then how long before she divorces him?

The sex scenes with Paul were intimate, tender, wanted; but the ones with her husband were rushed, glossed over and brief. Men notice that. They can tell the difference between real and fake emotions, when a woman is just going through the motions and now her husband recognizes that he isn’t her number one priority. That she is just going through the emotions and how long before he is tired of being treated like a pet dog?

Good story, and well written.

Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well done!!! ;-)

2 dumb whores

That was one of the weirdest stories I've ever read on this site.

As an old friend of mine said there are at least four things guaranteed in life taxes,death, nurses and trolley dollies.

Annony stick your head up your ass and inhale. That's your life smell! Now, eat shit and die

I loved this story,because it happened to me. My late wife had held sex from me since before Christmas. In March the following year we went dancing got drunk and had sex most all night long. ( I was starving for some by then.) April she had a Dr. appt. They found a benign tumor in her uterus. But she was also pregnant. Abort or keep the baby? I asked if she decided to have the baby when she would be due, in her haste she said mid November or early December. She had to have an emergency C-section as the baby was way past due this was November the 3rd. When I counted back the weeks, her last period was in February. So when we made love in March she knew she was pregnant already. I questioned her and she denied having an affair. i didnt press her on this. I loved her to much to leave her. The baby girl is nearing forty and she still calls me daddy. My late wife died thinking she had put one over me never knowing that I knew the truth.

Johnnie learns the truth, both women with their bastard children become whores to support themselves and their collective nine children by six different fathers (none of whom support their babies). Eventually both women die one of AIDS, the other Heroin OD and the children are separated in the system and have miserable lives. Was it worth it? Oh and Johnnie meets a nice faithful woman and has three terrific kids who all are very successful. The live happily to very old age and have many grandchildren.

Mr Scouries seems to tire quickly of a story line and not always finishes his stories.

This story has all potential for a follow-up in which Johnny, Cathy and Lizzie live together. They should get it out in the open about Paul and the others to come ...

Pray whoever knows this coward fag writer will punch him in his cuck throat for pretending to be a man........ Fucking useless idiot....

Erotic and sexy. A woman get the baby she wants and the cock she needs.

to offset the asshole of LIT"s 1 vote because his wife left him a cuck and he mad. So he takes it out on the writers of these stories.

death becomes her, the fellow adulterer, and the bastard. Ever wonder why men kill their wives and children?

It is her fault that she has no self control, no loyalty and allows herself to become a complete cheating slut. Like you said - horrible characters, bad story.

and it looks like a long range operation. TK U MLJ LV NV

A story like this brings to mind the best advice every husband / father should heed. "Trust but verify". Thank the stars for all future fathers there is DNA testing. Should be mandatory for every child born. Only read part and got the gist of this. 1* for not BTB.

Another lying deceitful whore. Having a good man raise someone else's bastard kid. Someone like her should have her fucking tubes pulled out by hand and have her pussy sewed together and then thrown out with the trash the lying cunt.

You know, this happens more often than not. A married woman commits an indescretion and ends up pregnant. The one-night-stand won't leave her alone. Their sexual relationship continues to the delight and also the chagrin of the married woman. Too young to not dream of babies, she has his love child and her husband makes a good DAD. The rest is of course, fantasy, but good fantasy. The married woman really might try to fix up her single friend with the Paul character, hopeing to shift his attention to the friend. Don't listen to complainers. Someone who thinks Literotica femal characters should behave like Donna Reed should go elsewhere.

It never ceases to amaze me the haters on this site will spew out all the hate for a story they read all the way thru. I hardly see them comment on a story they liked. I think they secretly liked it because they read it but can't admit to it so they spew out this garbage.

Bravo Writer on a job ell done to expose these haters for what they are.

I personally, though, liked this story very much. It's the type of story I love to see more often in this section rather than the kick the bitch to the curb type of stories.

Thanks for the read,

John

if you read the opening comments, that most readers would not like the characters, that it was an unpleasant subject matter, and many would be angry.

"Many readers will hate her, will want her punished for her perceived sins."

you will understand that the goal of the author is to stir up, anger, and make fun of the average reader.

And that is exactly what has happened. scouries is sitting off to the side, reading all the comments, laughing.

at us.

Amazing! The level of viciousness in the comments is almost beyond belief. I wonder why. Is it some kind of campaign? Seriously, I wonder why so many people take so much trouble to spew it?

but have some pride and name the child after his father. This was nothing more than a idiot with a keyboard. It sucks as much as spinners wife.

It's really very simple; if the story or the characters disgust you, stop reading. And spare the rest of us your vitriol. You are not responsible for writing it. You are only responsible for reading something you seem to hate. Shame on you!

Don't judge her? Really?!? You must be part of the 'nonjudgmental crowd'. You know the one that's totally fucked up this country with political correctness and such. Are you sure your name shouldn't be Scurvy? You probably just misspelled it.

You're one sick mother fucker

Vile Troll Bait

why and how people cheat. A one time thing or short affair is... forgivable.

But this.

This behaviour is reprehensible. To willingly deceive your adoring husband, to connive to set him up as a cuckold in the original meaning of the word, just so you can have a revolving door of ginormous dicks is beyond acceptable.

This is a story for 1*, but it would be easily a 5*, if...If she and the bastard child died in the child-birth freeing her husband to happyness...When the author tell us to understand her, I would if she liking it so much had chosen to be a whore...No need to be married...She and her friend could have a Brothel...

Sweet..................

you have got to write a sequel. we have got to know if cathy moves in with lizzie and if they have another baby by paul and if they might have one other with their new lover later, or does paul marry cathy.that would really a perfect ending,lizzie and cathy sharing cath's husband.think about it .see you later. bob w.

Thought I had read all your stories but somehow missed this one.

Thanks, tom anon

enjoyable, a good read

with whiskey wishes and cuckold lover dreams............-21,300,000,000,000 stars

Hi Paul, we have never met but we something in common. You are going to spend the rest of your life paying for those kids you made with that big cock. Don’t worry, I will let my wife have it when ever she wants, I will keep it in a jar for her. You on the other hand will have to earn your money with your ass and I keep all the money. This is my friend Pedro and has the perfect position for you; looking like a bike rack at a fag biker bar. Cathy will be working with you too, well in the same line of work, bye bye

yep....just human trash.... birthing more trash.(yeah, yeah, yeah, they're innocent babies....carrying trash genes.... to be raised by "mothers" with no morals. State prisons are filled with men raised y such mothers..... so are whorehouses)

must admit the dialogue was nicely written.

hopefully she gets run over by a car or a disease the kids deserve a good parent and person which she is neither.

Great story

Paul knocked her up and she was keen for that to happen, so they should be reesponsible for the resulting children; and John, he needs to be free of all of them.

For John, he can get out with minimal harm and have his desires for children elsewhere.

My wife had a baby with one of her lovers. It was a turn on for me

Couldn't find one character in this pile of drivel that had any good features at all 1*

Johnnie can have children with someone else, and she and paul can figure things out, together or separately

I thought a woman was the author of this story until I read the bio. You can write but your story line sucked. That's just my opinion. Thanks for sharing.

... she is evil. She, without consultation, makes her husband a cuck, and has him raising another man's child. Oh, and let's not forget the possibility of disease.

Yah. With wives like her, who needs serial killers?

After all she did nothing, except, break her marital contract; commit adultry; foster a bastard upon her husband; become a common slut; place her self and her husband to potential disease risk repeatly; continously lie and cheat; have no morals or principles; deny a child is rightful place and medical history; and damage her own, her childs, and her husbands lives while destroying her marriage. Sooner or later medical test or some other reason will force the proof of the bastards history and the husband will divorce her and probably seek child support for her bastard. Nope nothing at all to blame her for in this except the fact she is braindead and amoral.

great stories damn some are your readers are angry people..lol keep up the good work and continue this story

@Dwornock You are right only 30% of the women depend on large cocks, 70% of women works with normal cocks well, morover the majority of the women get lack of parts on the vaginal mucous membran from enormous cocks. They will be pain for days same to the lack of parts in mouth mucous membran.

I hope once the DNA test would be obligatory for all husbands after the childbirth and after DNA test negative result the mother should decler who might be the father....

After 20 years the husand could start law suit against DNA father to pay child support settlemt (1-2 children), when the DNA father gathered much money and paid the mortgage. The husband start a around the World travel from the settlement to stop for 2 weeks on Bora Bora.

How many bastards can these bitches get Johnnie to pay for? It is not a check that I would willingly write.

However, because of the almost impossible big cock part of the story, it is only a 4 **** story.

Nothing wrong with a woman having sex with a better looking man. That is almost all women do. However, only men want big cocks. Women have no interest in big cocks.

We have evolved so that normal size is best. Average is slightly less than 6". If larger size was an evolutionary advantage of even 1% per generation such as if women prefered larger cocks the the average size would be larger. Until the last 100 years a woman's first child was usually before age 20 and in the Stone Age it was low teens.

Therefore, if a larger cock gave a 1% advantage over that last 1,000 generations (less than 20,000 years), natural selection would dictate larger cocks. A 1% advantage for even 1,000 generations is huge. That is 1.01^1,000 = 21,000 to 1 advantage. Therefore, writing that women want big cocks is a strong indicator of low intelligence.

Jeeeeezuuuuussss! Do any of you people even read the story? The husband got lots of sex. He just wasn't able to father a kid, and his dick wasn't enormous, as seems to be the requisite for these cuckold stories.

It has been my and my wife's experience that IRL big dicks are no barometer for a man's real successes. Some of her biggest lovers are mediocre at best, in all life's metrics.

Most women who cheat do so out of need, and a big dick isn't high on the list. It's neglect, lack of intimacy, sometimes simpply a desire for change. And the people they cheat with are usually not rich, overly smart, or overly manly. They usually cheat with someone who shows them affection. Period.

Any positive impulses here are just screwed up. Husband is around to support children not his own, and no sense of loyalty to him, and certainly not fidelity. Does husband get to have sex with anyone here?

yeah that wasnt that bad. sounds like she really loves her husband but also wants to have fun. as long as he never finds out i think they would have a wonderful life. like your other story "angie's valentines baby" long as husband doesnt know and is happy to be a dad. who is it really hurting?

Fine she likes this, but at least let the husband off the hook and away from her. He likes children, then let him have them with someone that cares, with him and he's the father. Pays the bills and supports the cow, and she has such regard for him.

Throw her and her lover onto it and watch them burn.

She is the lowest manipulative bitch around. Burning at the stake is to nice for her.

I agree with the first 3

you talk like a human, but your not are you your just a sick fuck who should stay away from children.

stupid story.

is a cheatin slut. FRY THEM ALL>

Actually, I thought this story was well-written and Lizzie's fall for the big-dicked guy certainly is understandable. When a woman fears that she cannot conceive, that she is growing older and may soon lose her looks and figure, a vibrant, handsome young man looks mighty good. It was clear from the story that the conception problem was with her husband so, if she really wanted to conceive, it was reasonable for her to be tempted to stray. The big cock on Paul was surely an added benefit and enhanced her "enslavement" to him. My own experience is that a big cock can overcome many reservations and scruples almost every time. Good story. Keep up the good work

the wrong guy? If her husband was to used as parent/meal ticket/etc - then she needs to get caught and have it all, away from john, as she may. Deferred consequences, I would hope. AT least let john have the possibility of finding the same she found, since its not her.

My vote for this story: 1. That is all it deserves. Lizzie was nothing but a whore and amoral. Nothing loving about this slut. She lacks morals and she cannot even spell marital fedility. Makes me sick that the author 'celebrated' this piece of trash. Total disrespect for her husband and to add to her sordid life she brings an innocent into this world.

My vote for this story: 1. That is all it deservesa. Lizzie was nothing but a whore and amoral. Nothing loving about this slut. She lacks morals and she cannot even spell marital fedility. Makes me sick that the author 'celebrated' this piece of trash. Total disrespect for her husband and to add to her sordid life she brings an innocent into this world.

to bad the husband didn't catch them and kick her sorry ass out the door with nothing. while suing the lover for medical expenses/child support. not only is she cheating but she's denying him kids to have her lovers? what the fuck is that. sorry man, i like most of your stories but i just can't get in to this one.

I'm a little envious of Paul....

Well, you wanted a vote, so here it it! Total piece of crap; & why this ever got into Loving Wives is beyond me. She is a sleazy slut & that's her best quality, to put a cuckoo into her husband's home. Her character was portrayed is despicable, so she is definitively not a loving wife.

.......Paul had the nack of things...enjoyable reading...lottsa truth in what you have written...

Two skank whore sluts--johnnie is one big DUMB ASS--He should catch the stud Paul and cut his balls and cock off--then get rid of his slut wife..---BE NICE --BULL SHIT--put her ass on the street with her bastard children.

A very erotic situation. I envy Paul, being a natural daddy and fuck mate to these two women and their babies. It just goes to show that Mormons are not the only polygamous couples if things are handled the right way.

An ideal set up. Paul moves in as does Cathy and Johnnie is supporting all, not knowing the difference but liking the babies.....Great fantasy!

the behavior is not flattering in m/w, and thoughts of using john come so easy, and paul/whomever else. that is a comment unto themselves. at the time of confrontation, the words, but i love only you or such sincere thoughts will no doubt flow from her

You started off like you were going to do it, but then you became more technical (like a narration of what was going on). It needed to have more feeling. More of what she was going through, as she felt the pain and pleasure of his cock as it tortured her cunt like it had never been before.

The ending could have been a little more touching, but it did leave an opening to continue.

Your writings have great scenarios, but they just need more feeling. jim

What a load of sluts added to a morally corrupt teenager with more dick than brains , I hope they all catch something nasty and leave the gene pool.

I've been catching up on all of the entrys by scouries and this one was great! Maybe not as graphic as his others but still better written than some and personally I liked the story! Well done!

I really liked this story but had a big issue with the ending. It was cheesy. The rest of the story was hot though.

Not worth making a comment over.

Well i'm not a writer just a reader,and i like every bit of it,and would like to read more.Its a great story i hope you keep writing and i'll keep reading.Great job

Not bad and I like the premise. The story could have used a little more sizzle, the sex should have been more exciting than what it was. I am not sure why.

I get such a kick out of the "moral sex" police visiting an erotic story website. The irony inherent in that is just too much!!

Erotica necessarily involves elements of fantasy, and all fiction requires some suspension of disbelief. But your story, like so many stories in this category, is simply too unrealistic for the suspension of disbelief to occur. I think your story, as with so many here, is simply driven by your own insecurities, rather than by an accurate, interesting, or arousing view of women and sex. As a result, your main character is at once emotionally numb AND with a deep underlying hatred---and yet she's overtaken completely by a man with a big dick. This is simply your fear of rejection personified: an uncaring woman who hates you, who is taken away by a physically superior male. My advice: take some time to seriously question your beliefs about women and sex, and then try the story again from the beginning, but this time let the main character actually drive the events. You have enough details to draw out the psychology of the character---a traveling husband, resentment of him, desire for a more complete family---and her malicious friends provide a huge range of plot possibilities. But you don't use the material you've put on the table. Of course, if you find writing this kind of story somehow cathartic, and if the readers do... then go with it. Just realize, ultimately, that it's actually quite silly.

But she's just a normal woman. Not horrible or evil. Just trying to live her life. Struggling to be happy. So please don't judge her too hard. It's not her fault she likes it ... This woman is not anywhere near normal unless someone lives in the world of porn magazines. What a laugh for a preamble to a story.<p>Your imagination had some humor in it but not enough to be a humorous story throughout. Now a comment by Softly was a real hoot as her comment, “Over thirty percent of births of married women are from men who are not the husband”, is so ridicules she must use porn magazines and a really authoritative web site for her statistics. Wow, if you have three kids one isn’t yours by these statistics. People are such suckers to believe such undocumented statistics as statistics are only good for trying to guess at probabilities we might face.<p>This was fairly well written but so overboard with idiousy that it was fun to see some people say “Yeah you got real life right”.<p>As a sex story I guess some will be happy to wank-off with this, but for me I find it somewhat funny but not a real good laugh was had, as stupid can only go so far.<p>PT