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Click here"Please, picchu. May I kiss you better?" he asked softly.
Gemma gulped. There was only one answer. She met that teasing gaze and her head slowly dipped in acquiescence, melting, melting as the fire in his eyes deepened in ardent delight.
His smile widened and he held her still with his fiercely aroused gaze. Just looking into hers. Gemma was waiting, shuddering in anticipation, watching him, aching. Then he slowly curled himself back over her, palms either side of her, bending his tawny head back to hers.
"This kiss," he stopped just above her lips, breath whispering across the sensitive skin, "Will not be just healing."
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Sorry about the spaceless italics in the original for last chapter, it wasn't intentional, and I'll avoid using that obscure software package to write again- even once I converted the document to Word, there was obviously something different behind the scenes.
And thanks for the feedback and the voting! Please keep it up, I enjoy writing this, but love to know what it's like from the other side, so to speak, and want to improve. You're a great incentive.
Next chapter in April - after Easter.
- COMMENTS
Julielleover 4 years agoLove It. Was there a slight error towards the beginning of this chapter when Gemma was going to the lab and you actually wrote Beathan??
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI’m gonna try not to spoil for anyone, but is the tawny colored wolf that helps Gemma in this chapter a certain clue about someone from the last chapter?
Anonymousover 9 years agoAt the beginning of your lab scene you mention Be than. Need correcting
superfeluously_ealmost 10 years agoSo sensual and seductive right now! While the plot and history is a little vague about what's going on, the chemistry between the two characters is deliciously exquisite at the moment.
spearishover 10 years agoIts still confusing .the sentences are too long and drag on and on with yet again too much description and not enough clear cut explanation.Like others i skip paragraph after paragraph hoping to see if some explanations are forthcoming .Sadly ..they're not .I do commend your effort in writing so much each chapter but it's not gripping me to say the least.
dindover 10 years agoThis story seemed very promising in the beginning but I am sorry to say that I don't know if I'll continue reading after this chapter.
Not much has happened so far, mostly because the focus is on Gemma's repetative inner turmoil.
There seem to be some interesting points regarding the species and their inner functions but they have to struggle against a variety of cliches.
I ended up skipping many paragraphs and I wish I had skipped more.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoIt's true she just keeps on going on and on and on I got annoyed and skip through some paragraphs also, but I love this story.
Anonymousover 11 years agoSecond best story i have ever read on literotica, and trust me ive read a few haha. Best part theres still sooo many more chapters. Im hooked. I cannot wait to read more. You add the perfect amount of humor. I adore how they are constantly denying eachother and then attacking eachother for kisses. Oh my, Im in love. Thank you thank you thank you. -Jess
Anonymousover 11 years agoThis is chap 3 and it feels like the story is barely making any progress. Gemma was OK in chap 1, but she's getting repetitive. She just goes on and on. I liked how the story started and i did try to keep reading but I found myself skipping most of the paragraphs.
Anonymousalmost 12 years ago...reading this chapter while listening to/watching a pair of fine Celtic specimens banter cheekily. No joke. It's like milk and cookies! Excellent work!
