All Comments on 'Pawn Among Wolves Ch. 13'

I enjoy this story very much, and I am pleased that you at least keep posting your chapters. There is a lot of Authors on this site that don't. If you don't mind I would like to mention your other story, 'Selected for Sport' which is unfinished. I don't know if you still read the comments for your other story, but there is quite a few of your readers, including myself, that would like to see it completed. Are you willing to write a Chapter 4? If you don't comment here, could you please make a comment on 'Selected for Sport' to let us know one way or another? :)

Another great chapter, it good to see her controlling herself

I've been following this story from the beginning. it's just so well thought out and entertaining. I'm so glad you haven't abandoned it. you're a great writer and this is a terrific concept. i can't wait to see where you take the characters from here. I'm most interested to see how the wereem are "cured" who is helping Nicholas and if Mac's betrothed survives, how they deal with that. look forward to more. thanks again!

The chase with Mac and now the exhilirating escape of Kate and Bethan! Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see the rescue and reunion between the four friends. Kate and Bethan are tough funny characters and I can't wait to see what happens with them in the mix. Keep up the great work! 5 Stars. ~K.

Please, anyone who reads this - clearly many of you don't like this chapter so much, but I don't know why. Boring? Repetitive? Not much happens? No tension? Which bits specifically? Please, please give me some pointers, obviously something's missing here and i'm trying to work out what and not drone on at you. Would be grateful if you'd take a moment to tell me! Thanks,

SmileWhenYouMeanIt

SmileWhenYouMeanIt, are you reading the right comments as everyone else? You have nothing but positive ones. No one has said anything about it being boring etc. I think this story is awesome and hope you carry on for a long time.

Referring to what Anon wrote, I would also like to know whether you are going to continue with Selected for Sport. I think that story is awesome too.

Hope Gemma finds a way to make the Whites/ex-Greys independent of Mac before he loses it. He deserves a break and a chance to go home. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Yves

Yes I'll write more of it once I've finished this - so long as you guys promise to write back. I'm getting sad at the lack of comments. I write for you lot c'mon, where's the fun in no return?? :-)

I know it must be frustrating not receiving the comments, but please be patient. Maybe some of your readers haven't realised that you've posted this chapter. It needs to filter through and that takes time, and then that is when you will start getting enundated.

All you need to know is that you have two of the best stories on Lit. Just keep posting the chapters frequently. PLEASE?

I immediately scream for joy when I see a new installment of this story. I want to go back. and read it all over again. Thanks so much for sharing. I am waiting, albeit impatiently for the next chapter.

Love the intensity you build up for your 'scenes' and love even more that you don't let the distance shortchange the story itself. Getting into the action even more with each chapter it seems. So sad.

What a roller coaster. It started out on such a high for Mac and Gemma then ended on a low. I don't like when Mac relies on others and keeps Gemma in the dark. While she may not always be able to understand and some things may put her into a rage, I still think they are stronger together. Hoping all her pills will start working. She needs to tell Mac though, so he doesn't force her to do something ridiculous unknowingly.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

You kidding? Maybe a LITTLE bit for grammar, but not the story. Dark as it is, it's YOUR story -- and it's well-written. I may not be a professional editor or a professional writer, but I've been an avid reader since the tender age of six. I know a good book when I read one.

And this isn't good. It's fricken amazing.

Fantastic story! Great chapter- I'm dying to hear the rest! My only "complaint" is that it is confusing at the scene changes... Perhaps try doing a "*******" kind of thing?

Please don't leave us hanging. Such a wonderful book. I'm glad that Gemma is finally coming into her own. Thanks for sharing your talent!

Absolutely gripping chapter. Gotta love Doctor Wolf too. Keep up the excellent work!

And this is an outstanding story! Just write for yourself and don't worry about comments or scoring. Best art is conceived when you stay true to yourself and to your own vision. You can't please everyone 100% of the time. That's the reality of art. What matters most is that YOU are happy reading what you've written. Hang in there and know that if you stick to what you like, the readers who can appreciate it will eventually find your story if they haven't already. :)

You might want to update your Bio to let people know you're back -- last time it was updated was in 2011.

Please finish your amazing story. It's so captivating

Loving it can't wait to keep reading and see where it goes. I really hope Gemma starts to grow stronger soon. And noooo to Gus

When you turn this into a book please post the info because I would buy this story in a heart beat. You are very talented and this is an awesome read.

I’m Very Happy with this whole story just a lil different from other writers who’ve written in this same genre but, and I know it’s Finished now and you may never read these but you’ve got a Great pace going with it so just keep going! And I too read the story DoctorWolf has in fact that’s how I found you! Can’t wait to see how it all comes to a head and Nick that MF has GTG Yesterday!!! I Can’t Believe he killed Gus! Jeremy’s twin and the WolfLords grandson! He was SO AWESOME! He taught Gemma most of what she knows in fighting! I’m SO SAD to see him go! I too wanna know Who Nick’s working with!?! There’s No Way he should know ANY path Gus had been on yet He Did! So Someone In That secret castle on the hill is in cahoots with him and I believe so far it’s that Stupid supposed wolf “expert” at least if not more! I’m off to find out!!! I LOVE Mac andGemma together and I too Don’t like him blocking her like Cantfightfate said they work BEST TOGETHER! And I’ve ALWAYS said this in other places as well as in my life Communication Is VITAL FOR SURVIVAL!!! They’re FINALLY together they need to BE TOGETHER AS ONE!!! Oh and LOVE Bethan and Kate too I’m So Glad they got away, Hit Nick Not Once But Twice, Go Kate you Badass!! But Not Just That She Stopped And Had Bethan Grab The Package! Talk about a girl having her head together in chaos and under pressure!!! I Hope They Too find Mates in your Wolf Kingdom! Madam SmileWhenYouMeanIt!! Love that Too!!!

I thought since I didn't speak about this last time I'd say: LOVE the "dancing" chase, capture, "tortures", actual dancing. Having grown up with a dance choreographer for a mother, who made sure we all knew how to dance and follow choreography/choreograph I could picture the ENTIRE scene from beginning to end! And I'm STILL PISSED he killed Gus!!! And Of Course STILL LOVE the girls being included! I LOVE this story!!! SO MUCH!!! And I'll say again HATED him shutting her out!!! When you're with someone you work as ONE so when one falls, or in this case " crashes" the OTHER is there NOT JUST for sex , companionship BUT also there so that when ONE falls the OTHER'S there to pick you up! You're Just PHENOMENAL!!!