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You are one of the few authors on here that writes good alien storys. Keep it up!

but I will now.

Absolutely amazing. Honestly haven’t read a story like this. And the uniqueness of it just adds to the actual story so much that I am waiting (not patiently, more so a lot of checking and pleading) for every chapter.

Keep up the great work

I love these so much! Literally, what made me make an account :)

Hmm... I can't really articulate what I'm wanting to say on the subject. I'm not even sure If I do want to comment on the subject at this time. I will say, that I am wary of them and their actions. I'd like to think that the singular minds working on whatever project is happening wouldn't be able to significantly damage Bea... But humanity was enough to get their actual attention. And whatever they are doing is dangerous and most likely _wrong_ in the extreme, from a terrestrial and locally moral point of view.

Onto far better topics. Beatrice is such a wonderful entity. "More wombs!" Glad to have finally noticed your authors name on a story I wasn't yet reading. I seem to miss the first few chapters of lots of good stories, but in a way, that lets me get a bigger first helping of delicious goodness. So six one way, half-dozen the other.

Glad to be reading this story, and can I just say something about the Tags For This Story: awkward dinner party. Irl lol. <-- That doesn't look intelligible, but I laughed.

I can only hope that with Bea developing all this singularly focusing attention that she doesn't lose herself too much. The her that spent millions of years, just tidying up. A part of her that I'm sure our young Prince loves dearly. I would write some of my other hopes and fears here... but honestly, they would just be me interfering in the path the story may take on its own. I've been told my some that I can be an influence, and I've experienced (quite recently) from another a cataclysmic reaction that I still do not understand. So, I shall keep my more specific thoughts and wonders in my head and experience the story as it comes. For its writer is a far better author than myself. One needs only look at the differences in our publishings. For while quantity in and of itself is not a necessary denotation of quality, I know firsthand how amazing these stories are. And there are more of them, and completed ones. ^.^

Anyways. Thank you for sharing your inspiration with us here. Looking forward to the next chapter. Be well.

Not sure where you get your ideas from, but I for one am glad of your obviously-fevered imagination, and the skill you exhibit in bringing those ideas to fruition. Have loved each and every one of your stories, and this one, for the sake of Shizmet, hits each and every one of my buttons. Thank you

I hate to say it, but you should take breaks more often. This story, and particularly this chapter, really make me smile. I have to take breaks reading them because the nuance and layers get in the way of my poor (lately) ability to focus, and I have to do something else while my subconscious straightens itself out. I'm not wasting energy trying to guess my way through what isn't written yet. I'm enjoying every tiny morsel of warring personality types, instincts, and patience. I'm looking forward to watching it all bloom. Great job.

This series has given me (and I suspect many more like me) a new fetish. Congratulations on being a genius, you mad bastard.