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(in)famous science fiction editor, challenged his authors to "give me a character that thinks as well as a man, but not _like_ a man."

You have done so.

5 stars is no where near enough.

So compelling. So awesome.

That's why they had eyes! Lots and lots of eyes! Especially the giant space monster ones. Except perhaps for some Plurality people, I imagine nearly all human minds would balk too heavily at moving around without a similar set of stimuli. And while considering the breadth of human divergence there would likely be some AnComms that turned off their eyes, with the medtech available it would have to be a very serious act of will and choice to remain blind for them. My real question is what bodies were the 500 wearing that they decided to stay in? Personally I really hope at least one of the Cthulian space beasts thought to themselves, "Yep. Keeping this one." Besides, its not like they or Bea would mind tinkering with them after the fact. To grow more and larger peni ^.^

Solid ending. I am a little disappointed that we didn’t get a love scene in this chapter. After all, the last couple have been a bit gruesome.

Drop your swo...er, pistol.

Truly enjoyed the tale you spun and will sorely miss the cast of this one.

Looking forward towards the next story and characters. I'm sure it'll be another fun ride.

I actually cried.

You have spent so much time and effort creating a believable universe interspersed with varied and fascinating characters, it seems a shame if you did not revisit here again in the future. Would love to read more about Lou and Bea's adventures in the future.

Thank you anyway for a truly enthralling and involving story. Yet again you have pulled off the impossible: brought a smile to my face in a Covid-19 world.

Seems like we never got confirmation or explanation from Bea about her sudden understanding and mastery of morse code and their language in order to surrender. After all at the wedding she seemed ill-adept with the language.

I love this story. I so hope you continue it, be it a Pt. 2, or a sequal series. But, who knows…

For instance, she mentioned how for their kids, it would only be about 200 for them to have a human-like intelect, so maybe go over them beggining a family, and some factions not liking it. Maybe it gets so extreme that, combined with the “Bad” influence of GF and Beatrice he get’s a stack?

@SensualSigma

Well, she just had to understand enough to brodcast 2 words “I Surrender” Surrender is a much easier concept than communication about love. She had an understanding, not a mastery

Something I got to thinking about as this story hit it's later chapters and more mention of the stacks came up, as well as a lot of recent science suggesting the mind is not in our physical bodies but might be some form of quantum entanglement of it's own that our bodies access.

If Bea can instant communicate with herself through that quantum entanglement - could she, or a child she has - someday figure out how to 'host a stack' in her mind - and put it into a new body on another star system.

Essentially giving humanity the ability to instant travel to any world she or her 'mixed human descendants' are on. Turning them into an interstellar civilization.

We also have the little side story of the body of the Proximas that she was growing. If she can 'birth' that - then that species might in time be something joining that civilization, or at least now protected by rather than destroyed by it.

Imagine being a Proxima alien, a few thousand years into the future, as your stone age people begin to discover they are being watched and shepherded by an alien consciousness which asserts that it's mother left it there to guide them back.