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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A GIRLS, GOTTA DO

what ever it takes to arouse. TK U MLJ LV NV

PoissonSurLaLunePoissonSurLaLuneabout 12 years ago
Really cute concept

Loved the concept and the level of detail, it's a great little quickie story. There are a few technical issues, and running it past a volunteer editor would have made it all the better. But it's really good, and thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Proof read, there are lots of mistakes in this

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