All Comments on 'Pay It Forward, Pay It Back'

A very nice story. I will read more of your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Hey, love the story of sudden and unexpected romance. Can you consider another chapter in the Paul-Yuki story?

However; page 1; paragraph 6; line 2;

"challenging because of a lack of championship". Shouldn't that be companionship? :-)

Enjoyed reading this story and will look out for others from you.

This is a very nice and loving story that just makes me smile. Loved the happy ending and the start of their new family. There are some errors that while don't detract from the story, still need to be corrected to help with the flow of reading it. Kind of like a speed bump but not stopping the story. A really enjoyable story, thanks.

What a great love story. Well done 5++stars