All Comments on 'Pay Me In Kind'

Yes, the narrator did save her life, but at what price? He thought she could have been raped, yet in the process of warming her, erased all evidence and also committed his own rape. Clearly, she wasn't able to consent. Don't understand the mindset of taking advantage of a helpless girl for his own pleasure.

The author of this shit should be shot and castrated. Raping a previously raped person?! You're going straight to hell with gasoline panties.

Great example of non-consent, hope the writer submits a part2, this was very well written and believable.

To the critics, you only make yourself look stupid when you willingly search and read non-consent stories just to write how you hate them and the author....do us all a favor and just click the back button.

Very well written. I hope there is a part two. I would like to know more about how she got in the situation. It IS non consent and in the right category.

I liked this a lot. It is in the right category. At least it was one man and not 50 men.

Some non-consent stories deserve to be bashed, but this one was a nice non-consent. He likes women compared to some other "crazy" stories where you wonder if the guys actually hate women.

5 * and I look forward to reading about the upcoming week.

Other than the arm pit licking and biting her cheeks (face cheeks) it was good, those two things seemed weird.

As far as non consent goes this is one of the few that truly belong here and give a positive view on women. Most of the ones I've read tend to be about hating women. So props but, i do have to agree that the armpit licking and cheek biting was a bit different for me. Props on creativity on that though! Looking forward to part 2 hopefully :)

this story stands out from the usual BS non consensual ones. Very real and believable. Looks like this will be a winner with girls too. Cause this is soft BDSM which works for women.

Licking a woman's armpit is just another way to a shared intimacy. What can be hotter than being given access to the feel, sight, smell, and taste of her most intimate places: feet, ears, armpit, pubis, anus... That slightly sweaty crease under her breast is another favorite, as is the crack between her buttocks. If you truly love her, what parts are revolting to you?

This was delicious. Why dontcha write more!!

I really liked this story, thank you for writing it. My only complaint though is that in the real world, putting a hypothermic person in a tub of warm water would cause them to go into shock and you could kill them. You should warm their arms and legs first, just letting you know :) Good luck and thanks for the nice read!

This section is called NON consent for a reason. It turns some men and women on. The critics can go read Loving wives and such. As for castrating the author ... dude ... for all you know it could be a woman writer. If you can't stand the heat, well leave the kitchen.

So hot