All Comments on 'Pay the Genie Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Disappointing this got abandoned

Royse69Royse6910 months ago

DEFINITELY NEEDS TO BE FINISHED

Mamut22Mamut2212 months ago

really? just as it was gearing up? you stop? damn I love this story ;( come back and finish it please?

NightSchool33NightSchool33about 3 years ago

This was gearing up to be one of my favorite literatica story's of all time but I can see its been abandoned by the other comments. :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
hope

really hoping he dosnt get the watch

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
best ever

probably the best series i have read, and i agree with the other commentator, would love fore him to become a shemale.

Please continue the story ^.^

SmittyNZSmittyNZalmost 12 years ago
great read so far!

Loving the story so far! Hope you write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
fuck me

I would love to make a wish.and would love to have him change into a shemale.

ModuRazielModuRazielabout 13 years ago
fucking great

I love this series. amazingly well written. lets get some more!

fenyxdelsolfenyxdelsolover 13 years ago
more?

I love this story line! More, please? I'm very, very willing to pay the genie...

slykosslykosover 13 years ago
i agree

with "the-apocalypse" he stated everything i wanted to say. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!

the_apocalypsethe_apocalypseover 13 years ago
GREAT

Just read all three chapters of this story in one sitting and I am looking forward to reading the next ones you add.

bullfrogtsbullfrogtsover 13 years ago

I don't usually read the multi-chapter stories, but this one has my interest. Nice writing. Keep up the good work!

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERover 13 years ago
Outstanding

This series is so hot, I can see this going on for some time, very nice

PepperpuppyPepperpuppyover 13 years ago
I can guess the next storyline

I can see this a mile off.

The old man steals the watch, makes his wish and dies from being impaled on a huge 14 inch cock - right. But what a way to go!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Great story. Can't wait to see how this turns out!

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