All Comments on 'Payal ki Jhankar Ch. 09'

You will get shot if you land in Pakistan.

You write more as someone with a good insight on feudal culture. An erotica but this might serve as a point in bringing such cultures down.

It took long to come out. Any chances the next in the series falls in sooner?

Keep it coming :) 👍👍👍

itni dair men to maryam nawaz got knocked up, jitni dair aap between the episode laga dete hen

I have been waiting for the Ch. 10 since long. The long gap between the chaps is abit hard to bear. you narrate the story well & it seemed like you had a very good plan to take the story in the best possible direction. But suddenly you have disappeared. Request you to keep writing and not torture us with the long waits between the chaps.