All Comments on 'Payback's a Bitch'

SH.T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bollocks....

Biggest waste of time ever and I only read the first page.

It bogels the mind how all these LW haters call everything cuckshit and don't have a clue about life or love. obviously these guy have no love life of their own to think this was.

When am I going to learn to look at the ratings of these stories? If I would have bothered to look at the 2.95 stars, I wouldn't have wasted 30 minutes on this crap before I gave up. Just plain horrible.

Obviously most of the commentors on Here have strong opinions about how to deal with wife. You should all look for my ex wife blonde some where in mid to southern Calif. She is a nympho for sure. Even better when you get close to her she gives off pheremones that make men fall in love with her. LOL she was a nightmare and I couldn't get away from her. I am lucky I didn't eat a bullet. Things can't always be so cut and dry as many of you basement dwellers imply.

10 stars for the writer! I loved this sweet revenge and the happy ending. I suspect that the police would loved getting involved but fortunately Steve was too embarrassed to get them involved. Good job!

Where is the fucking revenge?? Bogus cuck story ....

Sad… really sad. 1 star and i need to wash my eyes with soap.

Terrible

0 stars - Stupid cuck/wimp crap.

I could not get past the first page and luckily skipped to the comments.

There I see that nobody else likes it either.

What a dipshit the husband is.

Gives the cheating bitch what she wants the most, more cock, actually rewards the cheating skank.

One of the worst stories l’ve ever read on Lit.

Definitely worth 1/5 just for being Cuck shit

PJ was so mad Mel as dicking around, what does he do? Gets several friends to gangbang Mel then agrees to let his friends gangbang her about once a month. Mel was not punished but rewarded. Next time Mel cheats I guess PJ will invite even more friends to gangbang her. Why did he not take out his cell phone and record her having sex with Steve at the window, flaten her tires in front of his house, yell in the window for the cheat not to come home and be done with her?

PJ, what can you say, first he is mad his wife was cheating, then arranges for her to get all the strange dick she wants from his friends. Wife can still cheat knowing PJ will bring even more of his friends over to give her even more dick. PJ would be better off just being her pimp! PJ needs to grow a back bone and kick her out on the street!

One page story: catch her, go inside, kick his ass, divorce the bitch, take the kids, let her starve.

His wife turns to another guy for sex, so the husband forces her to have sex with other men while he watches. What a sad excuse of a man.

pj one fuck up wimp ,biggest on the planet. his wife a nasty whore,

The wife is a sex crazed Slut and he is one of the biggest cucks I've ever read here. Letting some bowling pals screw his cheating wife. He should have divorced her and then got revenge on her lover, Steve... This so called story did nothing for me but got me angry for wasting my time - with the title, I expected a whole lot better plot, story, revenge....

Utter rubbish I wasted that time in my life skipping through it

With a sIck whimp husband like she had, it is no wonder she cheated. The story is just basicly unbelievable crap.

He stills loves her after he forces her to fuck his bowling team. This author is really fucked up!

NFW would I put up with her cheating. I would of packed my bags, left her and the kids, to parts unknown, without any qualms at all. Who knows, the kids might not of been mine.

REALLY???!!! Sick ass-hole!!!!

The part where they brutalise the other guy makes very little sense...especially since he seems to forgive his wife for her infidelity and then puts all the blame on him.

Needs work..that part was very unrealistic.

The point where the Husband brings in his friends to gangbang his wife. That shit is so ridiculous I can't even laugh. Turned what looked to be a solid story into a cuckyboy wimp fantasy.

The author is a sicko. Revenge yes. That no

Pure crap! Nothing more to say!

He made her a whore and supplied her more dick. Why was he pissed at her to begin with. He turned her into what he was afraid of. Makes no since. Crap story....

Their is not fucking way I would stay with a whore who fuck so other guy and then as revenge having my friends fuck her like the whore she is. Then keep her and keep letting my so called friends keep fucking her? the husband should just hand his balls to his whore of a wife or one of the other men that are so called friends. Then bend over like the fucking cockold bitch ass wimp he his and let his so called friends fuck his faggot ass as well because he is a bitch ass wimp!!

Written by a total sicko.

We know that much of the stuff in these stories is improbable, why not take this one as written. I was somewhat pleased with the way it turned out and wish that I had not read some of the criticism. Oh, well. I read to please myself and will stop reading the comments. I only read to see if I had commented on it when I read it once before. Enjoy your stories, thank you, author.

But you know what? Even still, there was still something to like. First, the Larry the Cable Guy reference tells you all you should want to know about the target audience. That said, this is what I liked:

1) The reconciliation was impractical and improbable, BOTH hubby and wifey changed personalities back and forth several times throughout the story. He KNOWS he has to get revenge, so he decides to force a gang-bang on her. This is like rewarding the kid who stole a cookie from the cookie jar by letting eat them all! Makes no sense and is stupid, as well as a fucked up cliché used by other authors several times. BUT! BUT! BUT..... here is the thing. It was revenge (in his mind) because all of his bowling buddy friends were ugly, unattractive losers. Guys his wife would NEVER think about fucking, much less giving the time of day. This must really be demeaning her, right? (except that she is such a slut, and does have some remorse, so she goes along and gets into it). The author paints PJ as a guy who CAN"T abide the thought of his wife with another man. I'm sure he thought he was done were her, and the divorce would immediately follow the gang-bang. But he changes his mind. And here, lance gt actually does explain his personality shift. Yes, his kids became the main factor in his decision, but he surprises himself and the reader with the secondary effect of his "revenge". He is actually happy to give his buddies a good time with his wife. They genuinely appreciate him for it. These are guys who would never have the chance to do anything like this...in their lives.....ever. The one guy hadn't been laid in 20 years(?) or something like that. The other guy had a small dick, but was able to put it to good use. So I admit, right after saying to myself "no way, fuck this shit...who does this????", I started thinking, I just might see what this author was trying to do here. These guys really were his best friends in the correct sense of the word. Giving these guys the best sexual experience of their lives HAD to make PJ feel good, and maybe even proud. And surprisingly, it made Mel feel good as well, as she eventually came around. So this ties into point 2

2) Low self-esteem issues were addressed, and confidences were bolstered. Usually in cuck stories (which this one definately was), the low self esteem is reinforced, and humiliation is looked at like a deviant sexual thrill. I HATE THAT SHIT! At least here, the losers get to feel better about themselves.

3) PJ Did NOT get sexually aroused watching his wife with Steve, just angry. I don't think he was all that sexually aroused watching his buddies fuck Mel either. He was more happy for them, and thoughtful, struggling with the realizations that he never really understood his wife, or her sexuality. Yes, he became a participant, but he wasn't sitting off in a corner wanking off to the action. In fact, he stayed fully clothed until the very end, or at least the last session.

4) the bad guy got his in the "end". OK, extreme revenge, or just extremely STUPID revenge? I won't argue that question. However, it seemed to fit with the overall tone of the piece, and the realism was that it DID seem like something a bunch of rednecks would sit around and come up with. Now whether they would get away with it in real life or not.....well......sometimes you just have to accept that for the purposes of this story: they did. To me, HOW they got revenge on Steve wasn't as important as the fact that they did get it.

I really surprised myself by liking this story more than hating it. Still a 3, but for something as corny as this was, I still found myself peeling back a few layers of this onion. Thanks author!

The husband watched and heard his wife enjoying the sex with her lover and eavesdropped on their loving phone calls. So he knew that she was fully committed to the affair, had voluntarily done everything she was doing. Wanting to punish her he brought home a group of his friends to gangbang her and she loved it. And so did he. oops.

But then we are to believe she had a change of heart, suddenly hated her lover, and wanted to join in raping and sodomizing him? She even came up with the plan and set him up.

As a group they brutally assaulted him, told him who they were, left enough DNA and fingerprint evidence to convict themselves several times over. Drove him to a public mall with cctv all over the place to throw him out of their own, undisguised van in front of shoppers and probably mall security, sticking around to watch.

Oh yeah, and they trusted him to not tell the police who they were. As if the hospital and medical staff wouldn't collect (Mandated by law) and hand over to the police all the evidence they gathered while treating him???

The after party/celebratory gang bang must have been a short one

the closet door has been opened. TK U MLJ LV NV

The Mall had security videos and had their car and license number. The Police were actually waiting for them when they got home to arrest them. They had a ton of evidence including their fingerprints and DNA. They went to jail for 15 years for felony assault and battery, sodomy and rape just to name a few. While they were in jail, he sued them all in Civil Court and won so much money he retired and moved to a tropical island to enjoy the rest of his life poaching married wives pussies that were out to enjoy their vacations. He won, they lost. The end to this giant pile of manure.

This is NOT fantasy..it is a pile of shit that the sorry excuse of an author dumped here. Author definitely does need to be re-calibrated.

Hey.....whatever floats your boat. Better to keep a family together than apart no matter how messed up they are. The story was extremely well written and the revenge was crazy but not the worst I've read on this site. Mel was a little wacky and perhaps a total slut but she loved her husband and children. I was not a fan of the content and wifesharing aspect of the story but inspite of itself it worked.

Love the 'internet hard men' who blithely smoke cock after cock, eat creampie after creampie, and toss salad after salad only to make laughable anonymous threats on the internet. Fucking classic cocksmoking cumguzzlers.

Yeah, this shit ought to be removed and all other crap posted by this sorry excuse of a human being. Maybe the author is really the afterbirth and the baby was thrown away. Like to meet the asshole in person.

Stories by this author should be removed from the site.

you must love 1s and lady stop pretending to be a guy,your feminist pussy is showing,the story has no flow to it and it goes no where, you have no concept of payback and your story becomes easily redundant,this is a glimpse of a man hating cunt trying to write a cuckold story for kicks and to get hate rating to get off on it.you should keep writing on day you'll be a real boy,hahahaha

Just divorce the cheating slut and be done with it instead of turning her into a cum slut for your team. What a spineless fool the husband turned out to be. And while I'm at it, you always finish the roof before you install the electric and sheetrock. Not only is it Code, but if it rains you have to pull all the insulation, wiring and sheetrock out and start again. Idiot.

The taste of cum. Let's give the writer a break here, she did her best to try and write from a mans perspective ...... And failed

Hubby has no balls so why should he care if his wife is a gangbang whore.

I wonder how he thinks about cheating now. TK U MLJ LV NV

payback, for whom?

no man could write something this stupid.

Wimp wimp wimp. Do you write from experience? You could have had a great story, instead you make the husband into a wimp...WHY

I'm just asking a small favor. Would you please inform your readers at the beginning of your stories, that the husband/boyfriend or who ever the wronged person may be, is going to end up a pussy whipped idiot, and that he is going to accept the cheating bitch. That way I won't have to waste my time on a story that sickens me in the last page or so.

Thanks in advance.

but you had to make the husband look like a piece of shit just like the story!!!!!!!!! R.T.

The only suggestion i can give you after reading this crap is go get some professional help from a shrink brfore its too late and someone clobbers you for wasting their time with this crap.

I probably would have kicked her out and thus, not go thru the gang bang thing. I am surprised at the virulence of some of the negative comments below. I do think that the whole tale is unrealistic but guess what? It's FICTION, guys! I have read WAY worse from other authors here at Lit. I, for one, appreciated the various emotions the characters felt. I also liked the retribution at the end; I just wish I could've done something similar to her lover when MY ex cheated on me. Well, that's my two cents' worth, good day to all...

It's too bad that there isn't a lower score than one!

Just a STUPID story

What a fucking punk, you have never been married, thats for sure.

I've read and written some of the crappiest stories ever but this is by miles and miles the worst story ever in the history of written words.

the offending wife was punished? the needs of the one fulfilled by the many

The worst story ever in terms of talent, intent and the outcome. Just a waste of everyones time.

if you gay,just say so.

I'm so glad you all loved the story. It takes a good one like this to get all the response I've been getting from you. I try to please you readers with all the things you love and hate in stories like this. My thanks again.

"Oh baby, you suck cock,like a pro. That was awesome. What a great way to start the day." <p>

she IS a pro. you think think fucking your whole neighborhood friends and bowling buddies night and day doesn't make her a "pro" at cock sucking? <p>

what fuckin' moronic piss-for-brain authoring nonsense is that?

You guys know Lance ain't playing with a full deck.

You ain't as clever as you think Lancey. What's a 50 for effort when you think you deserve to be up in lights? -it's garbage, but the fallout's been entertaining. A little like Charles Manson's musical career. Britboy.

All of you dumb fucks who commented can't read? PJ and his nephew finish doing the roof before they start the drywall. The nephew was getting ready to start at the beginning. If you want to pick the story apart, go ahead, but get the facts straight. As for 5 pages of crap, write your own fucking story and let's read yours. You dumb fucks can't put five words together that make any sense. BTW, I still love all you trolls, I love to read your comments and have my laugh for the day.

This wasn't worth five pages. A three word title for a story that had only the bitch, no payback. And, where in the world do they put houses together the way described?

5 PAGES OF CRAP

....I've built more houses than you've fucking seen,quite obviously as you state in your story.You fucking wrote it, not me.You wrote that the siding was done but the roof wasn't even sheathed. If you are truly a home builder you are the worst.And sorry pal but I've never seen a situation where the drywallers were starting before the roof was done.Yeah, you really packed my pistol lance-pistolpackinpete

any better. That will take talent and thought.

To being a waste. To long and even the f--king got boring. Try again good luck.

And here I thought I was the only one who really thought HarryIV sucked at making comments. Seems there's a growing number of people who want you to know that they really hate your comments. Maybe it's time to give the old brain a rest and call it a day. You really don't make sense when you post comments. It's like you tried to read the story, but the neurons just gave out and left you stupified. Then you try to justify it by calling writers "Fucking Morons". Now, now Harry, do us all a favour, take your pills and unplug your computer, I think that little mental problem is starting to get the better of you

Your wife, sisters, daughters are fucked by British? Ewwwwwww.

It has been classified as a date-rape drug. Seems the aussie guys love to smear it on their dicks and attract the koalas for a night of fun. Just love those fuzzy little things don't you. If you'll notice, your comments are always there for everyone to see. Have fun trying to get a message to that email address wanker, if you had any brains, you'd know that prem is a very commonly used name for addresses.

First off, that isn't my Email address, second I don't know who PREMwriter is, third, I never write anonymously. I have the balls, unlike you to write so people know who said it. You fucking wankers down under need to get yourselves something better to do with your time. As for your previous comment, I never saw it and it never appeared on my screen. So take your accusations and shove them merrily up your ass along with all the other cock that goes up it. Stop bothering people with your drivel about, "Look at me, look at me, look what I can do." No wonder your country advertizes so much for tourism. The women want some real men to come down and fuck them. They're tired of wanking little turds like you running around and they'll happily take the British guys you say are so shitty. Fucking kangaroo fucker.

And this Asshole writer DELETED it. WOW!!!! I made him do something which he refused to do i.e DELETE the comments. My comment was -- that PREMwriter & lance gt is the SAME PERSON. Lance gt's email address is -- premprem54@hotmail.com. Do,I need to say more??? Lance gt is also the "Anonymous" commentator.

The wife cheat on her husband willingly, and the husband gave a award for her?where´s the revenge?To be revenge, the husband should make her catch some friend of her to let him fuck, at least once a month.She got scott free.

The roof was on and the building was secure. The nephew hadn't started the drywall yet. The builder was starting the roof that day while the nephew got the interior ready to start. Ever build a house jerk off? I have. Learn to read before you die, might be the only thing you do right. Leave writing to writers and building to builders. You do your part and close your eyes and leave, permanently.Seems someone packed your pistol pretty good this time, huh pete

...left on Earth so I can't read all the comments on this juvenile fantasy but I'll bet no one picked up this angle-the most believable part of the story was your description of building.And that was of a project where the fucking drywall was going on before the roof was done! What dose had you taken before you sided the house without even SHEATHING the roof? Absolutely nothing erotic in this story lance,stick to something else,like building houses on LSD.-Pistolpackingpete

Just had to get in the game and want to play did you? Why couldn't you leave it in PM's where we were discussing this. You made your points there and I accepted and agreed with most of them. I told you what was going on and why this needed to go on. You said you didn't think posting comments about trolls was worthwhile and people should just delete them and move on. Now you're getting mixed up in this just to see yourself in print. I had a respect for you that you have lost. Don't come play in my game unless you want to be treated like the rest of the trolls. Your absolutely correct in saying this petty back and forth is getting tiring. Maybe one day the trolls will leave and this will be just a bad memory and we can all look forward to reading good, contructive feedback again. You're just adding fuel to their fire to continue. I really thought you were bigger than this, I really did. I've been watching the feedback since this morning and the comments are great. No troll bashing, except for me, and everyone is happy. Don't go stirring the pot just to see the shit float to the top

that you children grew up around here? This little game you're playing of <i>I know you are but what am I</i> is getting tiring and very boring. If someone did actually want to cull some legitimate comments regarding this story, they would be hard pressed to do so in having to first wade through the abundance of bullshit that has been posted here.<p>Lance, it's time for you and your playmates to call a halt and take a nap. Perhaps when all of you wake up, you just might be in a better mood. I have no doubt that many in addition to me would welcome the respite.<p>Oh, and I know that the usual retort most likely will be that if I don't enjoy reading this drivel, why don't I just leave. That's what I plan on doing. You may be wondering why I stayed around this long. As with Lance, I too am often curious about human behavior. I was interested to see to what depths of childishness this give-and-take could sink. To Lance and his foes, you have taken pettiness and made it an art.

You're another waste of time. You haven't got anything better to do with yourself? Why don't you go with the other kid and play with yourselves. Is there no one down under that can handle two fuck ups like youselves. I guess the grown ups are having too much fun going down under each other to bother with you. If you're lucky, they might leave you a little bit of cum for you to suck on. Now hurry off and get your asses home before it gets dark.

I can understand. You have no other work to do. You sound like a British wimp. I know, I know you are not a British. Ya' know, we Aussies are too good to waste our time with an OLDIE. You must be a waste of time. & your name must be Time Pass. Of course, you are a Time pass. You are a result of your parents "Time Pass".

Yes you ya wee turd. Ya consider me to be old? I'll take yer heathen hide and put ya over ma knee and give ya what ya need. How dare ya give the good people of Australia a disgraceful showing with that tripe coming out of yer yap. Yer nothin' but a silly wee poofter runnin' aroond we' a snottery nose. It's the likes of you that that people feel strongly aboot planned parenthood. If yer Ma and Da knew that you were comin' they'd have tied as many knots in the both of themselves afeerd nay more like ya would happen. Now away we' ya, ya pestery wee snot and go play we' the other bairns in the crib and leave us old folk alone why don't ya. Don't forget, type softly and carry a big stick. Gee ya a whack we' it next time.

Just imagine, this old little guy, fumbling on his keyboard with his stick in his other hand. So funny!!!! I wonder, your family members will be so scared seeing you fumbling on the keyboard. I think you should keep away from this as you are tooo old & you know heart attacks can happen. So cool down.

Let me be the first to say how much I have enjoyed the repartee amongst those of you who have nothing better to do with your lives. To all of you picky pickers, I only wish I had your kind of time on my hands - imagine what I could accomplish! Maybe something worthwhile! Btw, I am anonymous because I really have no connection to this "community", if you will, but I do enjoy the storytelling. Besides, even if I were a "regular" I could and probably would mask myself behind some made up name, age, location, and even gender. The majority of you are all in hiding anyway so what would it matter? No one would ever know, but more importantly, why would anyone really care? But, because I always root for the underdog, Lance will definitely always have my vote. I hope he wins the prize, whatever that may be, and the rest you can just go crawl back under your little rocks with your tail between your legs. (I was going to say with your tiny penises, but that wouldn't make any sense, since they wouldn't reach.) Hang in there Lance - it's all good!

Almost forgot to thank you for plugging my other story.

Keep those cards and letters coming. The readers do enjoy a good laugh while reading your comments.

Does any one know about a black list that the troll anon. speaks of. My trophy I hold is the one you trolls gave me celebrating me has the "Most Hated". As for getting noticed, perhaps you didn't read my prior comment to your king. Those little boards on the right of the screen attest to getting noticed. The addition to numerous fave lists also speaks of notice. So what black list am I on? Is there an award ceremony? Do I get another limo ride? What kind of award trophy do I get? Is it a buffet or sit down affair? Can I bring friends this time?

But for the wrong reason. Many people told you earlier (I'm talking about The Usual) that don't waste your time. You are black listed now. Don't get flattered that your story got so many comments. But look down & see you got nothing. And you don't have any trophy, your hands are still empty.

I do like writing LW stories. I find the sociological experiences of women who feel the need to go outside of a marriage for sexual gratification interesting. Human behaviour is unique among the animal kingdom and we are the only species that unite and then seek sex elsewhere. Other species that unite, do so for life. So delving into this subject has great interest for me as well as it does for other writers. This subject has many variants and both the male and female are subject to self subjucation to see if the grass is greener over there. We put so much stock into our sexual selves and feel that it represents the essence of our egos or super ID. I hope this answers your interests in wanting to know why I write these kinds of stories.

You answered yourself with your own question and statements. Yes, this is a place where I can say EXACTLY what I want. Why shouldn't I be allowed to keep writing my feelings and those of others on here. If Harry and the rest want to keep attacking me and other writers, why don't WE have the RIGHT to attack them back? Why should we just sit back and watch their comments be posted and do nothing? You feel we should be like a country that gets attacked and allow the invaders to come in and take us over. When has that happened in the last century or two. Are you the kind of person who sees bullies picking on a defenceless person and doesn't do anything to help them. What kind of person are you then? Don't accuse me of spouting off inane rhetoric, when you are doing nothing about a disgusting situation. This is a war and I will not back down. You want peace, you have to fight and defend your right to have it. You're either part of the solution, or part of the problem, which is it?

Sorry if you have heard this one, Jesus goes into a hotel with THREE nails and says, "Can you put me up for the night?"

Your story is interesting to those who enjoy such humour. YOU like to wind people up, Why? what do you hope to gain by this? This story is a free speech site. Readers and writers can say EXACTLY what they want. That is what makes this site unique. Harry and you can go at it all week if you wish to. But you achieve NOTHING Harry and his friends will achieve NOTHING. So why this story? why write a story in an area you don't like and don't take seriously? You say to readers to stay away from the LW stories. If YOU don't like them why write a LW story? It doesn't make sense. You end up being just as much a hypocrite as they are.

You love counting so much, here's some more figures you can play with. As of today, my story was read over 12700 times and voted on more than 380. The most commented story in the last 24 hrs, is mine. The most commented story in the last 7 days, mine. Look at the last 30 days Harry, it's already climbing up that one too. If you want to get noticed as a writer you have to make some noise. Hey, didn't I make that statement to the other writers yesterday? Many were asking how to get themselves noticed by readers and I clearly acknowledged that this was one way of doing it. So far, since this has started, 5 people, including some well known writers, have added me to their favourite author list. 3 have added this so called piece of shit story to their favourite story list. I have received 12 PM's from people commending me for sticking up for myself and doing this. So if you want to go on about numbers, please keep responding and let's see if I can make the all time high.

who can't count. Harry, before you try making me out to be a fool, take the time to go back and read how many times you responded and what you said. Don't try to come off as an innocent. You are from from innocent and deserve as much feedback from writers, as you give to them. I told you very simply that if you keep writing, I'll keep responding. You seem to think that you and your army of minions can run around this section spouting off like your shit actually means something. It doesn't. It's shit Harry. Shit stinks. People hate stinky shit. Where I come from, we pick up that shit and toss it in the garbage. That's where you and the rest belong. I notice comments from readers who didn't like my story, and guess what? They responded to the story and refrained from calling me names. Something else they seem to be able to do, they at least give a score of 25 or more, just for the effort. Why is that Harry? Why is it that trolls only know zero? Is it because you all are one? Is that why you all mark it on a story? You only recognize zero. Bikers call themselves 1%ers. We should start calling you trolls the 0%ers. You can all tattoo that on yourselves and feel proud that your nothings, Do the site a favour and go inhabit a cave somewhere else and take your band of 0% trolls with you. Give the readers a chance to enjoy something before you come in and trash it and leave nothing but a horrid mess behind. BTW Harry, your troll friend Phillip informed me of something about you in a PM. I won't stoop as low to expose it and use it against you, yet. But as a bloodthirsty Scorpio, there's one thing you should know about us. If we can find a weakness in someone, we will attack and sting with deadly force and accuracy and make sure you're fucking dead. You've been warned.

all you are doing is keeping your story popular under section in feedback portal <b>most recently read </b> by flooding the feedback with your own posts.

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All I did yesterday was ask one 1 question... a RESPECTFUL Question. I asked you where was the payback?

That 1 question sent you off on a tirade of name calling.

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Posting remarks that you not like or agree with does NOT make me a troll. Calling me a troll over and over again doesnt make me one.

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Payback is a bitch? So is thinking. You should try it some time. Please respond with 5 or 10 more of your own posts....idiot

never sleep. I enjoy reading their comments. I love how one-sided and egotistical they are. They accuse me of writing crap and do their best to debase me by their diatribes. Why can't they take the time to read ALL the commentary and see that I did acknowledge this was a story of little writing value and strung together all the elements of a LW story that they themselves asked for. I am accused of masochistic tendancies for responding to them, yet they feel that they can assault me endlessly and I am supposed to sit and just watch the comments fly by and do nothing. That would constitute masochism, so please get your pathetic, little minds wrapped around the proper context of your insults. As the great Troll King, HIV tried to do yesterday, I went at it word for word with him and left him speechless and humbled that his insults and so called criticism had no place on this site. No my dear trolls, I will not sit and let you spout off your incessant vitriol and accuse me and other writers of writing garbage, while you hunker down in your caves and grunt out your clap-trap. Loving Wives are just that, loving wives. Take the time to understand what love is and how it applies to a relationship. Understand the meaning of respect and trust and why they are supposed to be honoured in a relationship. The women that are written about in LW stories are anything but. These are fictional accounts of women who have strayed and suffer from it. Whatever a writer wants to portray them as is their business. Your `job` is to read them and enjoy the story and if you think,(big if here)you have something valid to tell the writer about their story, it should apply to the story and not the writer. As for the troll who must have more fingers and toes than normal, there are 71 comments, not 83. This makes 72, and counting.

Roll around in your cum as you get fried. And no a lot of LW writers dont get fried. But then again some of the have stories with actual plots and meaning. You write for one reason, to have people read your stories. Then you complain after someone has read it and doesnt like it. Instead of wanting them to comment you tell them to be quiet and not tell you. What to imagine what type of mental illness this might be?

Adding my "100" points to Lance 100 percent "100" point responses to each and every poster, and you still move Lance point average no more than 0.00002 percent!

Humor R lance. Sacrilegiously intended to be crap was accomplished but the real story is in his comments [ all 83 of them ].<P>

LW is a serious arena where either consequence or self cucking is played - there is no sloppy intended humor tolerated here.<P>

The constructive comments are many and were shaped by you intentionally to be negatively pointed. So why the vitriol?<P>

It is clear that you wished to see your words beyond all else - the puzzling part is why you feel it is fun to make an ass of yourself by intentionally writing a conveluted sick self demeaning nonsensical male humiliation story to incite normal responses to said crap?<P>

Then inanely churn the site with more insightful trash of the same level of base stupidity with every self serving comment.<P>

In the end you have proven what any idiot could have forecasted.<P>

Intentionally alienate people by inane provocation and they will respond - DaaaH - some test.<P>

So - As you sew - so shall you rip - how irrational - or not?

I'm new to the site and posted a few stories. Even though the LW story I posted is pure fiction I caught hell from e-mails sent to me. While I don't like the subject you wrote about in this story, you get 100% for standing up to these jerks. If I don't like a story, I just don't vote on it. No need to be a jerk.

his wife, but what did he turn her into. Now he is going to be sharing her with his friends on a monthly basis? What is she going to be doing the rest of the month. It migh have been a payback on a cheating wife and a pussy hound, but how can a MAN watch other men fuck his wife. Remember, ONCE A CHEAT, ALWAYS A CHEAT. I wonder who she will meet at the grocery store next. Mel has to remember, two wrongs do not make a right. She cheated on her husband and then she cheated on her lover. A woman not to be trusted. PJ, watch your back.

to hear that your reception has been tarnished by the trolls. If my story was the reason that they attacked you, my sincere apologies. I was a newbie like you once and didn't know where to turn to for advice. I received lots of help from readers and writers and soon found my way around just fine. Take your time and just click around on things that interest you and if you need any help, I'll be more than happy to help out. If you want, you can write to me personally and ask whatever you want to privately. Don't let a few bad apples spoil your fun. There are many who will help you if you ask them to.