All Comments on 'Payday'

I really love how you combine human connection with power play. You do a great job teasing out the difference between who a person is outside of the bedroom and what kind of sex they are into, and building a world in which casual, kinky sex can still feel meaningful. You gave us a thoughtful, generous character who wants to use people while still helping them and a considerate, innocent character who is willing to sell herself but also is exploring herself--I love it!

Well-written and interesting.

I was sorry that Jim was so good-looking. It reduced the tension that girls looking for sugar-daddies experience.

Glad to see you writing again

It was a good story but rather mild for the non-consent category. If the ending had been a good gang bang with all her hole's repetitively filled and fucked while initially bound then once so used up no restraints were necessary..

This one is closer to Romance than NC.

This is a great story, glad you are writing again. Your stories were always very well written. However, with each new story, they are becoming more and more vivid. Keep up the good work.

This was a lovely story. Just as I was getting a little bummed it was so soft, you pushed it that little extra bit. Well written, and an amazing premise. Thank you for sharing.

Loved it!

Great story!

Well, that was hot.