All Comments on 'Paying for Pleasure Ch. 05'

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darkdance69darkdance69over 6 years ago
Ideas

Since we are continuing along a line of a fun, semi-serious direction what about Tracy's Mom? Cousin? Friends other than Kim? Just some thoughts.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
BEST. AFTERNOON EVER!!

AWESOME! FANTASTIC! INCREDIBLE

The most AMAZING story.

What a wonderful surprise

FUCKING the UNATTAINABLE WOMAN..his AUNT and the INCREDIBLE equally UNATTAINABLE LEZ PARTNER.

OPEN UP THE BANK..INTEREST FREE LOANS

How can you top this?

petskunkpetskunkover 6 years agoAuthor
BEST. AFTERNOON EVER!!

LOL, glad you enjoyed my tease, Prop. Unfortunately, I think it takes mom out of the running for future episodes. At least until I come up with a new hook for her. I'm thinking on it.

In the meantime, I have some more loans in mind.

Thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Seems like some ages are confused

The father and his grandmother?!? And she is only 60 ? Am I missing something?

Otherwise- great story.

Looking forward to 6

petskunkpetskunkover 6 years agoAuthor
Seems like some ages are confused

I have explained the ages over and over. Glad you enjoyed the story though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Tracey and Rick, married. Hopefully.

With the way Tracey has been directing their relationship. I'm hoping to see them getting married soon. And I can see all of this turning into, Rick with a large incestuous harem.

petskunkpetskunkover 6 years agoAuthor
Tracey and Rick, married. Hopefully.

Thanks for reading and enjoying my story. I hadn't considered the pair getting married but that may well be what Tracey decides next. I appreciate the suggestion. The Danville series are harem stories as is the Whiteness series. I hope you check them out,

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
INCEST

All Rick needs now is his mother to turn up and he has a FULL HOUSE.

petskunkpetskunkover 6 years agoAuthor
INCEST

Thanks for the comment but I don't see Mom in this storyline.

TheKrrakTheKrrakover 6 years ago
While I am enjoying this series...

... this particular episode just seems rushed. While all of them are around the same length, the action in this one just seems to have flashed by quick as lightning. But please keep writing.

4/5

petskunkpetskunkover 6 years agoAuthor
TheKrrak

Sorry you were disappointed. Thanks for letting me know.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 6 years ago
In case you are unaware

She is a Lesbian. This includes every part of her body.

Just a touch overdone, like the girls are teenagers, including all parts of their bodies.

And I still havent worked out how 18 year olds have a 60 year old great grandmother. Ahh the mysteries of fantasy land.

Your story telling is really good, and you write fairly well. Please keep the repetition down a bit, it gets boring.

ZigmysterZigmysterover 6 years ago
Need to check your math.

Daughter is 18. Granny is 60 something. His Aunt Sherry and her twin Sister (also known as his Mom) are 40 something... He is???

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Keep it going!

Please? Very hot sex! Love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Tracey said Kim and her were being fucked by rick but not in the story so far ???

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